|Reviews for The Sending|
| RayneNumbers chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
:O no you killed a Maruman, i like this but this isn't Elspeth she's not the type to give up like this
it was well written though thank you
| Glass.Paradox chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
The prose here was well-done for the most part, as was the imagery, but the dialogue seemed stilted and forced. I think the biggest problem is how angsty it is - even though she often doubts herself, Elspeth is far too strong to give in to this kind of wallowing.
That's probably the reason a lot of the words seemed OOC in her mouth.
That said, the last few paragraphs were well written, and overall it wasn't a bad take at all on Elspeth leaving Obernewtyn.
| axxe chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Beautiful story! But I don't get it. Did Rushton die? 'Cause my dumb mind is stopping me from comprehending your story. So beautiful, though.