Reviews for Chasing A boy through the wind
ng jun cheng chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
If you are not gonna update it, may I take over
ng jun cheng chapter 8 . 9/1/2014
I was hoping that all female characters be married to naruto. Sakura, Ino, Tenten, Hinata, Hanabi and Temari
Animaman chapter 9 . 7/28/2014
Story is long overdue for an update, and it's amazing how not once Naruto has brought up the seals that the council used to stunt his growth, and how whatever supporters he has would respond to the fact that Naruto could have been the next Itachi. Three things, who is in the harem now? And will Naruto finally snap even more on people trying to force him into either marrying their daughters or help them gain power for their clans? And will somebody finally get to slap Sakura and Ino and knock them off of their high horse, while also pointing out to the fact that due to their abuse towards Naruto, he would have more then every right to retaliate against them if they so much as try to take advantage of his trust?
yuyuyre chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
You have potential, just don't know how to use it right. Your gamer needs work, your story's structure is some what lacking but pretty good at getting the point across. Don't fill it up with so much useless drama, use little bits to spice up the story. I look forward to your next story.
ng jun cheng chapter 7 . 7/17/2014
Poor Naruto, He should be happy, but instead he is running for his life to survive. irony isn't it
onlytoask chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Here is some quick advice: left align the text. I'm pretty sure your story isn't any good anyway, but I can tell you many readers, myself included, are not going to stay around long enough to find out once they see the centered text.
KamiNaruto chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
For The Record The Shadow Clone Justu Is A Kinjustu For How Much Chakra You Need To Make One
ng jun cheng chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
I hope you update it as soon as possible
REMEMBARDACAPS chapter 8 . 5/31/2014
FANBOYS...UGH...I USED TO HAVE'EM...
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...HAAAAAALLLLLPPPP!HALP MEEEEE!PLEASEH,KEEL ME!THERE IS NO OTHAH ESCAPE!I ACCEPT YOUUTH IF I NEED TO!AAAAAH!
DACAPSGUYSTRIKES chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
Hanabi:he doesnt have any parents?
hitomi and hinata shake their heads no.
Hanabi: Then how was he born?
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Hanabi: waait...how was I Born?
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DAGUYOFDACAPS chapter 6 . 5/31/2014
YOUTH!YOUTH SHALL CONQUER ALL!
THESAMEGUYAGAIN chapter 5 . 5/31/2014
COOOOOOOOL. NARUTO HAS A TALENT FOR BEING HELPS YOUNG MEDICS IN TRAINING...
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...NOT. CALL ME THE GUY WITH DA CAPS
THESAMEGUY chapter 4 . 5/31/2014
IM THE GUY WHO TALKED BOUT THE SASHIMI! :# GOOD JOOB,AND NARUTO WONT DIE. WHY?BECAUSE HE WILL HAVE LOLLICONS! I DONT EVEN KNOW WAT ARE LOLLICONS,BUT THEY REMIND ME OF LOLLIPOPS,SO..
SOMEONE chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Gaara: Gimme Sashimi,muthafakers!
Kiba:Language!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
Since 6 girls have to be married to naruto, i was hoping that ino, hinata, hanabi, sakura, tenten be married to naruto
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