Reviews for Not So Not Welcome
fedoralover101 chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
I don't like the sound of "newest adversary"...
choco meru chapter 9 . 12/2/2012
I loved this, you're very talented and I'd love to see a sequel. 3
killing u with umbrellas chapter 9 . 2/13/2012
loved it
FireAndPowder chapter 9 . 1/8/2012
very cute ending and very believable for their characters I loved it great story! :)
ViKsAtA chapter 9 . 1/6/2012
Woah! That was AWESOME! Love it! Love you too!
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 9 . 1/2/2012
AWWH! How cute w

This is definitely my favorite chapter. xD Such a great read~ Well worth my time! *hugs*
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 8 . 1/2/2012
It makes me so happy to see a bottom Mello :'D

I think the lemon was pretty successful ;3
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 6 . 1/2/2012
Mello can be so clueless at times. xD But, we love him anyway. I know I've said this before, but, I love your writing. :D A lot.
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 5 . 1/2/2012
This isn't much of a review, but I really like how you did the chapter names... :D
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
I wish I could eat and not gain a pound -_- I actually have to EXCERCISE. D':

Anyway. Next chapter~!
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 2 . 1/2/2012
Ahh, Mello. xD Lovely creature, is he not?
reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I'm not very good at constructive criticism, but I AM good at compliments :D And this deserves one. *nodnod* I have a feeling this is going to be a VERY interesting story, and way worth the read. Pfft, it's M&M, of COURSE it's worth the read. I was so happy when I saw this on your profile ;w; *totally wasn't creepin'*

Time to read onward! (:
Satary chapter 9 . 6/14/2011
great job and i love the ending!
Mustached Kira chapter 9 . 5/13/2011
nice story . u should make a sequel :D!
Luna Cool chapter 9 . 11/27/2010
K im doing a review for the whole fic, AWWWWW! that was really good! Tho i would have put more lemon in it (but thats just me) Its a great fic, honestly, gonna make all my friends read it now!
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