Reviews for I love your cream sauce
SweetlyDesolated chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
The cream sauce part was weird, but I like the overall story :)

~Deso
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
loved the oneshot . keep them coming please. thank you
Dom0916107 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I like it! Ahh Snape i love you!
Sully Lu chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I have read this a few times already, still can't get over one annoying problem here: Why is there an UNZIPPING of Snape's pants in the segment of "sex-against-wall" while NO MENTIONING OF ANY ZIPPING of any kind after the "ORAL-sex-on-the-desk" done by Potter TO Snape, then "Snape's erection poked into his stomach but Harry was only turned on further."?

Since the flow of the story has been very fluid, Snape didn't think of zipping the pants back on, and Beta didn't catch it, either!

If Snape actually had zipped his pants back on, as being aware of the students outside of the unlocked office door to ask if Potter was turned on by it, then, Gamma Reader like me [sorry to flatter myself here] is NEEDED! Because we all know how cautious Snape IS. He'd probably already warded the office before Potter arrived with some kind of smart spell which either only allowed Potter to pass at that time or anyone Snape verbally permitted to enter from inside.

What do you all reckon?
wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
WOW IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
I loved it!
Severus is the perfect lover for Harry!
Great work!
Very hot and kinky!
Great write
Kudos
Blade
Shadow Stalker7 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Still love it, even the second time through :D
JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
That was so awesome, hot too!
Tamikolee chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
I loved this story :)
jennadancer chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Excellent!
Rika100 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
This is great! I love it!
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