Reviews for Son's and Father's Part Two
crazeeria chapter 1 . 10/4/2020
i read both parts last night and i adored wach part!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 10/10/2017
Great story! I enjoyed it!
ANN chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
BEAUITFULLY WRITTEN
s01itaire90 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
There were definitely a lot of ooc moments for Bones, some slightly annoying at first, but then I remembered that I am a hopeless romantic and got over it like it never happened.

I just love fluffy happy stories... but then I love angst ridden ones and, well, pretty much every type there is.

I absolutely love Bones and Booth. And you did a wonderful job with the island. It is obvious you have been there and enjoyed it immensely.

Fantastic job. I am really enjoying your stories.
chymom chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
So does Booth and Bones get their wish to live on the island or what? What happens next? I love your stories!
Mezzo187 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Really enjoyable story...I'm guessing you've been to Greece at least, if not this actual place. Great B&B interaction, love the fluffiness. (Although the ending is just a bit fanciful, but that's fanfiction for you.) My only constructive criticism is that no self-respecting American male would willingly wear a Speedo unless he was on the swim team participating in practice or a meet. ;) (No normal, straight ones, anyway)
Kymissy chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
OMFG this is the MOST wonderful, romantic, beutiful story I have ever read in my life! I cant find my words, seriously... it was soo amazing

Pls if you have some time give us another fantastic B&B story like this. Im dying for them, I can't wait till they get together on the show.. HH must hurry himself up

Okay I think I should go now, it's past midnight here and I have only 4 hours to sleep, but I just couldnt stop reading.

Thank you once again for this amazing story!

xxx
Smittenwhenbitten chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Hi again! I have decided that you are my own personal travel guide. I swear, I'm completely tossing up now between Rome & Santorini... Don't suppose I'll be able to afford Oia though :(

Do you know I had no idea who Will was at first? I didn't know that was his first name and kept coming up in my mind with that Billy Bob guy. Tricked me!

Enjoyed it very much, though I think I liked the first part best - I'm going to head back and review it now, was too eager to get to this last half to hang around and type:)

Oh - what an educator! Kabazzah ... Had to go look that up and am now bewildered at the array of info I have missed out on. I must be woefully under- educated in some areas. Was there a class I missed somewhere back in my uni days? So much to learn.

Thank you again! xx
MentalistLover13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
First, I just want to say, that I have read ALL of your stories! I have enjoyed every single one of them and am a little sad that this one was my last one until the next time you post( I hope that is not too far from now. Lol. I loved part 2 of this story! Great job, but you already knew that!;)

Enjoy your almost two page review!;)

Some things that I liked:

1.) I loved that he went to Grease to go see her a week early! How freaking adorable of him!)

2.) When she was telling him that her hat was lucky because it saved her from most of the venom and then Booth saying “Put it back on, back on now! Right now, woman.” Hahaha! Oh that is Booth for you! Lol

3.) I liked that you brought back the wet statement again and how he thought she leaned on something such as a water bottle when in fact she was actually wet for him that time. Hahaha! Too funny!)

4.) “I’m so glad your Booty has come for you” well I guess he can say that! Lol) We all know he has a nice one! Hahaha!;)

5.) I loved their love making on the beach in the moon light! It was beautifully written! I loved the narration of the whole scene and the detail you really put into about the stars) I loved how natural it was for them to just keep talking and Brennan just kept on undressing him and herself while he continued to talk and how she joined them when he was talking. The whole scene was very beautifully written. I got teary eyed when he told her that she was his heartbeat! That was just so damn romantically cute!

I loved these lines:

Booth: “I was once scared to touch you.”

Brennan: “I was once scared to love you. I’m not anymore.”

Beautiful job with those lines! This was my favorite scene with them making love out all of your stories so far) Great job!

6.) I loved how Booth stepped up and helped his father with his rent and gave him a job at the Barbers. I find that so astounding how he forgave his father. It showed how great of a man Booth really is. So I am very happy you wrote that in there)

7.) Bones saying 'Boow-chick-a bow-woow.' was freaking hilarious and just freaking priceless!)

8.) I loved the piggy back ride!)

9.) I loved the picnic scene!)

10.) I loved that you had Booth help her with the dig! It really showed how much he cares so much about what Brennan does for a living, and how he has paid attention to her over the years about her work.) It showed that he respects and takes great pride at what she does. Which was beautiful. It was a very lovely scene! Great job!)

11.) I knew it! I just knew that the woman was pregnant! Don’t ask me how I knew, I just had a feeling! And I was right! ;D The whole story behind the family was so moving! I loved it. Great job, Bex!)

12.) I loved this line!: 'Booty FBI, now... I ave snappeer, shark, tunar, calamari, more lobster, but Dr. Brennan gets da big one, not you. Hahaha! It just sounds so hilarious with his accent! :D

13.) I love the stories you makes up about their past! They utterly amaze me! :D I loved the bear story and about the buck shot in Pop’s ashes! Hahaha)

14.) I loved the whole scene at the restaurant! It was super cute! I really liked the flower peddles on the bed and how you wrote that they flew up like confetti. Nice Narration! :D The morning after was just priceless!)

15.) I love when Brennan calls him, honey!) so cute!)

16.) I just have to say: Bahahahahahahaha, for the donkey scene! This was my favorite line: “Seriously, Bones they don't understand American, being Greek mules obviously.” bahahaha! I freaking loved it!

17.) I loved what she said about fishing!: 'Arrh! Kill it, kill it! I dislike fishing immensely!' and the best part: Booth: 'You said you wanted to try it?' Brennan:

'Yes, but I was hoping I would fail at catching one. Get it away, Booth! Kill it!' too freaking funny!)

18.) I loved the surprised wedding Booth had setup for them on their private beach! I loved that the whole family was there! Great ending to the story!

I loved it! I hope you write another one soon!) Great job, like always!

-Cassandra XX
Beth Cain chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
WONDERFUL!
LydiaR1984 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Again you have written an amazing story! I can't wait to read more! Happy New Year!
Siler02 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Wow! I loved this story...both parts! I read the story before I read your bio and figured you had to travel to Greece to explain it so well. I've never been there myself, but I could just tell you know? Loved the end btw. How beautiful!
1life2ROCK chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Great story!
Pyrate Nyre chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
This was wonderful. I loved it. It was by far the most romantic B&B story I have ever read. Don't stay away to long.
FreewayKitty chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I absolutely loved your stories. And I love the happy endings. I like how you show all the wonderful ways these characters can get together and be happy and still in love. This is so much better than the direction the show takes. Thanks for sharing your talent & I hope you continue to write.
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