|Reviews for FireflySerenity Series|
| Suzy Q1068 chapter 2 . 6/10/2019
Thanks for this one, Jet. I really thought you got the very challenging speech patterns down accurately. That couldn't have been easy to accomplish. The circumstances presented here, about Simon and River's father lying to them and attempting to kidnap them, not for parental love, but for more unsavory reasons, seemed like it might have happened in the show (if it had lasted longer than 12 or 13 episodes.) I liked the title and that no one got what River meant at first. These chapters are really 3 interconnected, but stand alone stories. Thank you for sharing your talents.
| Kateri3740 chapter 3 . 7/28/2018
Awww! I love this story! Could you continue it please? I can't wait to see whatever situation it will be when Simon finally does trust the captain! Is he going to start testing too?
| Gttttttttttt chapter 3 . 5/6/2014
This was a nice story .
I can see you did a lot a work and gave lots of thoughts to build these events ..great job
You did manage to touch on emotion points ...I liked that River did all that to make sure that Her brother trusted Mel . And also to relieve her brother from having to be like a parent for her .
My only problem was that charchacters were hard to swallow ..I didn't feel connected to any of them .
Thank you for writing .Take care
| Gttttttttttt chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Intetsting Story :) ...
I thought the dream that Simon had about his sister was very heartbreaking :(poor both of them :(
| Hellsleprechaun chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
This was really well written and everybody seemed to be in character. I liked that, although he should have told the truth, Simon decided to help the people anyway and that River only lied to protect him. It was very sweet that Mal was concerned enough about Zoe that he asked Inara to sit in Wash's old seat so that she wouldn't have to see a stranger sitting there. I also loved mal giving Simon an awkward hug and telling him that he respected him.
| Draechaeli chapter 3 . 1/10/2012
This is a very interesting story. I hape that you continue it, because now I am wondering about what the very bad thing in the future could be. Keep up the good work!
| skittles09 chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
Love this story. Would really like to see more chapters..
| caseyrn12 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
it was FANTASTIC..i totally enjoyed the story and the charaters personalities. nicely done, i hope u plan to write another chapter
| applemysteries chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
This story is brilliant and I have no idea why you abandoned it. It would be FANTASTIC if you picked it up again, especially since I do enjoy Simon and River finally getting someone to care about them(:
So, lovely story and I will follow it in the hopes that you will continue!
| Desiallen16 chapter 3 . 7/25/2011
I can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Petticoats chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
I really enjoyed this story :3
| AchillesMonkey chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
I loved the "telling" exchange at the end. That was really cute.
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
wow it was a good one thanks
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
wow it was a great one thanks
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
wow it was a good one thanks