Reviews for On the Roof
BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I don't think Mary was out of character at all! I think you wrote her extremely well! I loved it
BuJyo chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Sassy, sweet and fun! It turned out great!
sagey chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
loved it ..loved her telling him i love you...
wish it had happened on tv..
liked maryua nd brandi talking...
thanks os much for sharing..keep the stories coming
hugs
Betherzz chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
really great story :) LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! i think you did a fabulous job with all of it even the eleanor thing at the end :) and think marshall knowing where she went without her saying a word to anyone it says something really big about the 2 of them :) (would love for this to be a long long story it doesnt say complete but sometimes the writer forgets that part... if its the beginning to the story i cant wait to see what comes next, if its just the 1 shot, its perfect :) ) thanks for the great read