Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey
JazzieJ7777 chapter 45 . 5/28
I just loved this story, I love bdsm type stories but I love Edward Bella stories just as much...I am a total addict of Twilight and just love this lovely land of fanfiction. Rosalie was a spitfire with the masters I was actually hoping for a little bit more of a retaliation on them and after the four at first that the rest of the harem join in and torment them further lol...But I also have to tell you that the way you wrote this it was also so very erotic and during certain chapters was highly aroused...Thank you for this story, I wish I could read your other stories but I wouldn't be able to understand them, maybe one day some of them might be translated and I would love to read them...
LaPumuckl chapter 45 . 12/25/2015
Merry Christmas, dear

this was a sweet ending to their interesting time together
LaPumuckl chapter 44 . 12/20/2015
There was a lot happening in this chapter, I'm glad Charlie could begin to redeem himself. Even if he still took money from Edward, but I guess it's a part of the history...
I wonder if the good duc wishes he'd known about Volterra; )

Thank god all our love birds are reunited, and the women only got another fright
LaPumuckl chapter 43 . 12/17/2015
You are so evil to end that chapter like this, my dear ;)

As if the meeting with Mr. Newton wasn't bad enough, it's so much worse now... And as soon as Edward made the decision of the group getting split up, I thought 'don't do it, remember Alices warning of staying together'... I can't come up with any idea why she wouldn't have fought this decision, for Colin was very forthcoming with her:(
LaPumuckl chapter 42 . 12/16/2015
Hell yes, they did it :-D

Now I hope the slaves from the field could hold up their part as well, but if not by now, I'm sure seeing the convoy they would believe in Jake at last. And even if it would mean a bit of disturbance of their time limit, it very person hoping, the remaining three guards should be overpowered easily...
LaPumuckl chapter 41 . 12/16/2015
I don't agree with Rose about Charlotte, but I see her point in being careful whom to really trust outside their "own" circle
LaPumuckl chapter 40 . 12/15/2015
Oh i so remember that honeymoon phase Bella is going through here...
LaPumuckl chapter 39 . 12/15/2015
Gotta love Rosalie; )

And popcorn surely would have been the better choice...
LaPumuckl chapter 38 . 12/15/2015
Ah... as smart as Edward is most of the time, as dumb he was here...
LaPumuckl chapter 37 . 12/15/2015
Somehow i don't mind post posing to read more about that plan if it means seeing Mistress Rosalie deal with the three brothers - should I get myself some popcorn while reading the next chapter ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 36 . 12/15/2015
Hot damn, that dream Bella had while being narcotic was something else;)

Should Tanya have her own agenda already?!
LaPumuckl chapter 35 . 12/15/2015
I so saw that fight between Edward and Jake coming, because it was too good to be true... Why does everything between guys have to end in a passing contest? ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 34 . 12/14/2015
Again there was a lot happening in this chapter.

Jasper really went through hell and back, poor boy:(
Of course he would feel the need to get even more feared by the slaves than his father, it probably was about his troubled past as well...

Colin Whitlock, his visit to Alice was very interesting, too. I was by much surprised that even after sharing his part in Jasper s fate, he didn't even want to let Jasper know he was sorry for not believing and later on not helping him...
But jasper is very smart, maybe he'll get to that conclusion himself; )

I think Jake was the biggest surprise here. It's the way he questioned Edward that surprised me, and his fast agreement to help
LaPumuckl chapter 33 . 12/14/2015
I think the song Edward had in mind was more than perfect here;)

It's amazing how much love can change ones typical M. O. ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 32 . 12/14/2015
He surely is good at keeping her in a state of constant arousal ;)
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