|Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey|
| lol chapter 22 . 4/1
in chapter 22 Edward molests bella while shes passed out and hearing him justify it made me want to throw up...
also wtf was with Edward SLAPPING bella to wake her...but he didn't want to throw water on her?
slapping is ok...but water isn't? does that even make sense to you? fucking idiot
| jk chapter 21 . 4/1
its funny how Edward doesn't think hes just as bad as the others...just cause hes what? nice while raping and molesting them he thinks hes not a sexual predator? HE IS! and he should be fucking killed! You act like its ok cause he gives them orgasms...what the fuck does that matter in the end? rape is rape!
This story is sick
| Guest chapter 19 . 4/1
you have Carlisle say that Edward worries about bella more unlike the other slaves...except we just read an entire chapter about Edward worrying about tanyas asshole...LOL this story is so fucking dumb and contradicting!
| jk chapter 14 . 4/1
why does Edward seem to think he has ANY authority over the SLAVES...? Their not HIS SLAVES
| jk chapter 10 . 4/1
why did Edward keep checking bella for "distress"? I thought she was being punished?
ya your a dumbass
| lk chapter 9 . 4/1
ohhh your soooo scary whoreward...at the end of chapter 9 Edwards like "she will what the cost is" whats the cost whore? you'll sex her up...?
| lk chapter 8 . 4/1
gee I wonder whats gonna happen next...ill give you a hint cause I'm pretty sure I know...bella is gonna be a wanton slut for Edward and Edward is gonna give bella a std
| jk chapter 6 . 4/1
chapter 6 made it sound like Edward is in love with tanwhore...he can HAVE AND KEEP HER...bella and jake! or bella and jasper! At least jasper isn't a disgusting whore that fucks girls with condoms right after they've been fucked by a bunch of old men like Edward does!
| jk chapter 5 . 4/1
Tanya has been there for YEARS and no one has fucked her ass? Shes a sex slave, yaaaaaa I don't really believe that. Also Edward makes such a HUGE deal about giving all the woman orgasms...like hes the ONLY one to do that and because he does that hes not "using" them...and he acts like hes in charge to protect the girls? LOL its fucking laughable! Hes just as big of a piece of shit as aro and the rest of them...actually maybe hes worse...ya hes worse. He earns their trust in the name of protection just so he can get paid and use them...at least with aro and the others theres no lies or manipulation.
Edward acts like these girls have rights...when in fact they don't, THIER SLAVES! AND THIER NOT HIS SLAVES THIER AROS...SO WHAT ARO DOES WITH THEM IS HIS BUSINESS.
Edwards a used up hoe, NO THANKS.!
| jk chapter 4 . 4/1
if Tanya has been there for years...wouldn't she know to just go with it? And isn't the one of the points of bdsm punishment? why would aro want EDWARD to punish the girls? wouldn't aro do that himself? that doesn't make much sense. Edward is the kind of guy that has no problem using the same women that everyone he interacts with uses? that's fucking gross.
| jk chapter 2 . 4/1
how convenient for your story! Bella is a wanton little virgin whore and Edward is into bdsm...like I said...how convenient
| jk chapter 1 . 4/1
I'm guessing the year is ...a long time ago...do you think that they said " sex maniac" back then? Yaaaaa I don't either!
| FluffynSmutty chapter 45 . 11/23/2016
| JazzieJ7777 chapter 45 . 5/28/2016
I just loved this story, I love bdsm type stories but I love Edward Bella stories just as much...I am a total addict of Twilight and just love this lovely land of fanfiction. Rosalie was a spitfire with the masters I was actually hoping for a little bit more of a retaliation on them and after the four at first that the rest of the harem join in and torment them further lol...But I also have to tell you that the way you wrote this it was also so very erotic and during certain chapters was highly aroused...Thank you for this story, I wish I could read your other stories but I wouldn't be able to understand them, maybe one day some of them might be translated and I would love to read them...
| LaPumuckl chapter 45 . 12/25/2015
Merry Christmas, dear
this was a sweet ending to their interesting time together