| Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey |
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  Guest chapter 45 . 7/23/2012 LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter! Loved the ending. Thank you again for sharing this great story with us. You are a amazing writer. I am off to check out your other stories. Thanks again. |
| Marya chapter 5 . 7/19/2012 The time frame doesn't make sense at all. I doubt someone during he reign would say "whats up?" -_- the writing is also very direct. Very point blank. It makes it too easy to read and seems immature. I get the distinct feeling it's almost like 50 shades of Greg, but I apologize if it's not |
| Guest chapter 45 . 7/18/2012 I'm so sad that this has come to an end! It's been a wonderful story, and I've loved your writing! I'm glad the the Volturi are going down for their crimes! Thank you for sharing it with us |
 Aggie94 chapter 3 . 7/16/2012 Hmmmm interesting. Jasper seems a bit mean. |
| Aggie94 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Interesting start. Poor miss Bella. Meg |
| CoppertopJ chapter 45 . 7/16/2012 Exceptional story. |
| CoppertopJ chapter 26 . 7/15/2012 Okay, so let's see; Carlisle is attracted to Esme, Edward is attracted to Bella, Jasper in his youth was chivarlous, and saved Alice, and Emmett wants Rosalie to dominate him. Hhmmmmm, looks like a revolution on the horizon. Viva le revolution. |
| CoppertopJ chapter 22 . 7/15/2012 Ducking hell, he should have killed Aro right there, then gone up after the other two. |
| CoppertopJ chapter 21 . 7/15/2012 Chomp, chomp Bella. That's one way to take a BITE out crime. |
| CoppertopJ chapter 16 . 7/15/2012 It's about time? Is Rosalie deranged, or just sexually frustrated. |
| robsessed1123 chapter 45 . 7/15/2012 great story! ty bb |
| CoppertopJ chapter 15 . 7/15/2012 OMG! I can't believe he let her go? |
| dwright chapter 45 . 7/15/2012 Great story. Thanks for writing |
| CoppertopJ chapter 8 . 7/15/2012 From angel to demon in three easy strides. Bella sure can pick them. Hehehe |
| CoppertopJ chapter 7 . 7/15/2012 I really like the plot of this story. So original. Man in the iron mask meets unleashed sex fantasies. Very original. |