Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey
Guest chapter 45 . 7/23/2012
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter! Loved the ending. Thank you again for sharing this great story with us. You are a amazing writer. I am off to check out your other stories. Thanks again.
Marya chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
The time frame doesn't make sense at all. I doubt someone during he reign would say "whats up?" -_- the writing is also very direct. Very point blank. It makes it too easy to read and seems immature. I get the distinct feeling it's almost like 50 shades of Greg, but I apologize if it's not
Guest chapter 45 . 7/18/2012
I'm so sad that this has come to an end! It's been a wonderful story, and I've loved your writing! I'm glad the the Volturi are going down for their crimes! Thank you for sharing it with us
Aggie94 chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
Hmmmm interesting. Jasper seems a bit mean.
Aggie94 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Interesting start. Poor miss Bella. Meg
CoppertopJ chapter 45 . 7/16/2012
Exceptional story.
CoppertopJ chapter 26 . 7/15/2012
Okay, so let's see; Carlisle is attracted to Esme, Edward is attracted to Bella, Jasper in his youth was chivarlous, and saved Alice, and Emmett wants Rosalie to dominate him. Hhmmmmm, looks like a revolution on the horizon. Viva le revolution.
CoppertopJ chapter 22 . 7/15/2012
Ducking hell, he should have killed Aro right there, then gone up after the other two.
CoppertopJ chapter 21 . 7/15/2012
Chomp, chomp Bella. That's one way to take a BITE out crime.
CoppertopJ chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
It's about time? Is Rosalie deranged, or just sexually frustrated.
robsessed1123 chapter 45 . 7/15/2012
great story! ty bb
CoppertopJ chapter 15 . 7/15/2012
OMG! I can't believe he let her go?
dwright chapter 45 . 7/15/2012
Great story. Thanks for writing
CoppertopJ chapter 8 . 7/15/2012
From angel to demon in three easy strides. Bella sure can pick them. Hehehe
CoppertopJ chapter 7 . 7/15/2012
I really like the plot of this story. So original. Man in the iron mask meets unleashed sex fantasies. Very original.
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