Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey
LaPumuckl chapter 30 . 12/14/2015
Inc again with the bad timing...
LaPumuckl chapter 29 . 12/14/2015
Oh I agree about Cris as well, that woman is so talented! ACAP was a masterpiece but I'm still unsure if WISP didn't get even better than it;)

A lot was happening in this chapter, and I'm pretty sure I won't be able to do its justice, but I'll try anyway. ..

I think it's remarkable that Jake was able to come to the right conclusion about Aro and this specific punishment. I just doubt he'll be too happy to hear about Edward consoling Bella afterwards *whistles innocently*

Ah, esme. Even if she's the one the most safe from the Volturi being a slave in the household chores only, it must be the worst position to a care giver like her. Having to rely on bad gossip mostly surely has to driver her insane :(
But still she has it in her to add another "ward to her collection" in the good doctor ;)

Alice... low and behold it's not much you gave u about her, and at the beginning of this tale, I wasn't too sure if I was going to like her... she's one of the most difficult characters to write in an AH theme I imagine. But boy did she surprise me at gong off at Jasper like that!

Yeah, that probably only leaves him now, again... I'm curious how his triggered memory will people around him "see" him now
LaPumuckl chapter 28 . 12/14/2015
Seeing that Rose wasn't too unhappy about Emmett succeeding to arouse her, I'm glad she could at least enjoy some of their time together; )
LaPumuckl chapter 27 . 12/14/2015
Glad to see there's a bit of the Rose we do know from the original as well... i was starting to worry over her lack of empathy
LaPumuckl chapter 26 . 12/14/2015
Seems like Jasper is (finally) using his head for something good (again)
LaPumuckl chapter 25 . 12/14/2015
Jasper is only another victim of the volturi... I wonder if that knowledge will ever be shared and helping him with anyone
LaPumuckl chapter 24 . 12/13/2015
Okay, I can throw this "insult" with a grin, but you really were that cruel? Not only did Jasper wake up but at this bad timing?

Your readers who took the time to review probably were read to throw the pitch forks here ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 23 . 12/13/2015
Oh she, that was hot...
LaPumuckl chapter 22 . 12/13/2015
Bad boy indeed;)

If they all despite Aro and his brothers s much, why don't they poison them one by one?!
LaPumuckl chapter 21 . 12/13/2015
Just as I thought, Bella is in so much trouble for protecting Alice...

care to share what that comment to icy was?;)
LaPumuckl chapter 20 . 12/13/2015
Does she have a death wish? As much as I love a strong minded Bella, I'm getting worried about her sanity more anf more... it's one thing to play her mind games with Edward, which I highly enjoy, BTW.
But biting the dick of her master? That's insane, brave to no end for sure, but not smart...

And don't get me started on the Volturi because I'm still having tears of laughter from my eyes about their physics
LaPumuckl chapter 19 . 12/13/2015
Hm... Carlisle didn't reveal as much as I hoped for to Bella about Edward, but his knowledge about Jake and his reason for the travel were very helping
LaPumuckl chapter 18 . 12/13/2015
Karma is a bitch ;)

Seriously I'm laughing my ass of right about now how fate came to bite both Cullen boys in the ass with the "new shipment" :)
LaPumuckl chapter 17 . 12/13/2015
Go Rose!
This was heavenly
LaPumuckl chapter 16 . 12/13/2015
Even in this "bad guy" role Emmett and his thoughts are as hilarious as always - thanks for that

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