Reviews for The Slave Who Wouldn't Obey
LaPumuckl chapter 15 . 12/13/2015
Damn, she has such a "bad mouth" on her... if she'll ever allow herself to enjoy what Edward is offering her in pleasure I'm not sure who's going to be "in deeper shit" ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 14 . 12/13/2015
I'm a bit relieved this wasn't the next punishment scene, but on the other hand the longer it's going to be until than the more anxious I'll get ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 13 . 12/13/2015
As tough as this punishment was, I doubt it's over already...

oh Bella, what did you bring on yourself now?!

How cruel this must have seemed to your WIP readers, having to wait a week would probably bad already, but more? Eek ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 12 . 12/13/2015
Well, as difficult as it is to say (without looking like the devil myself) I can only congratulate Jasper about him finding ways to make each punishment worse than the previous one!

And even if it seems like Jake is doing well enough with his running off, I doubt he'll succeed from the warning Garrett gave him at breakfast. And if he was really smart, he would have waited a few more days to hear all their stories to really "know" where to go instead of running (okay horse riding) blindly in the sunset ;)
LaPumuckl chapter 11 . 12/13/2015
Well, Bella made a very good point about the second part of her punishment, and I'm very much (positively) surprised that Edward went along with it
LaPumuckl chapter 10 . 12/13/2015
10 slaps with a riding crop? Don't get me wrong, but wasn't he supposed to punish her twice?
LaPumuckl chapter 9 . 12/13/2015
From his pov things seem even worse for Bella
LaPumuckl chapter 8 . 12/13/2015
Oh my... poor Bella feeling so lost while getting bathed. But at least it wasn't as horrible as she expected;)

Aaaaand she met Edward... I'd say "so it began" now
LaPumuckl chapter 7 . 12/13/2015
After knowing what happened to Jake for his attempt to run, and the kick he got for kissing Bella im not sure, if it was a smart move to jump at this point...
Sure, having to listen to Jasper and Emmett isn't pleasant, but at least she would get some more information about the people she was about to meet not too long. And if death really was what she wanted to achieve, surely Bella would know to wait for more speed of the carriage at least :(

Hopefully Jasper will get a bit of his own medicine for damaging the new "goods"
LaPumuckl chapter 6 . 12/13/2015
Honestly, I'm no big fan of reading either Ewan or Bella with someone else, but like here, sometimes it's "necessary". And it was a damp hot lemon as well
LaPumuckl chapter 5 . 12/13/2015
I really like Carlisle, he does everything in his power to help these women, even if it's not much he can do...
Edward isn't that much of a difference, he's just not as resentful as him
LaPumuckl chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
I guess it's no surprise the Volturi like to set their "own rules" into the world of BDSM, but sadly enough those are there in RL as well:(

All in all, Edward is in quite a good position living and work wise with them, though. And having a good physician close by never is a bad thing;)
LaPumuckl chapter 3 . 12/13/2015
Well, again you surprised me;)

Jake surviving instead of Rose wasn't what I saw coming. But I'm glad you spared Alice and Esme for sure, maybe Rose will get to them on another way...
LaPumuckl chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
It was very "nice" that Jake was more than willing to help her out here;)

But him complaining about her timing was uncalled for, he knew how she was raised... maybe he should've thought about showing her earlier instead of waiting her out - silly man o:-)
LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Hello dear, I'm not sure if you remember me from the Facebook group, but I got too curious about this story to not start it now;)

I was surprised of the time frame you chose, but think it might work well for the D/s part you're plotting...

Bella shall be married to Mike? I'm very curious now to see how she ends up at Edwards, lol
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