Reviews for Witness Protection
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Interesting one-shot and plot. :)
casammy chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
God, I am glad that dean never goes to resign sammy and that sammy this one of return and that does not have intention of leaving dean, one without other one they would never be capable of working and surviving as god it can be so bad and to propose they separate?
Chersti chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I loved it, the consept is so original and interesting. It's sad that they had had to live separated from each other though, would've loved to read more about their lives when they're not together :)
driver picks the music chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
I loved this! I would love to read more, if you're going to keep it going! :o)
mtee1958 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Wow that was good... what a tough choice to make. I really liked the idea. You did a good job!
x.lizzy.x chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
wow...that's really cool! I like the idea...

it's so sad that they have to be separate from each other :'(

great job! :)
Ampanda chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Omg you just broke me
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
AWWWWWW THIS WAS BRILLIANT! :0

aooooowwww...so so sad! I LOVED IT! *sniff*

xx

beautiful! zxxxx
CBloom2 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Oh my that was so sad. I really can't bear for our boys to be apart like that. I guess I'm a sucker for their co-dependency issues!

Very good story though, and did love how they were able to see each other every 5 years. Good job.
PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
*Clings to you and sobs*

Dammit, you have undone me! No!

Dammit...

Oh, boys!

Thank you for this, honey...

*hugs*

Mandy
wcfan chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
*reads story*

*returns an hour later to review in a semi-functional state*

I’m sorry. God’s big reward for saving the fudging world is to separate them from the person they love the most? Did his brain get fried when he was on sabbatical? Because that seems more of a punishment than a reward! I mean, c’mon, Sam wasn’t even able to attend Dean’s wedding (btw, a teacher? Does this teacher have a name? *wiggles eyebrows*). What about when they have kids? Birthdays. Anniversaries. Christmas. Thanksgiving. These things that families are suppose to celebrate together and they can’t celebrate with the people they grew up with?

What happens if Dean gets shot down on the job tomorrow? Is Sam going to find out? Is he gonna stay ignorant to that fact for 5 years until the day Dean doesn’t show up? What if they decide that this life is not worth it? When walking away is just too damn hard? What happens to the people they are with now? Is it really fair for the people that they are involved with to be lied to for the rest for the rest of their lives?

What about the hunting world? Sam’s studying to be a doctor. Dean’s a cop. How many police stations and hospitals have these guys been to their whole lives? If there are any professions that would encounter anything from the hunting world it’s these two. They’re just gonna go about like they don’t know what’s going on? What if a demon figures out what they did? They’re bound to be more demon like Crowley or even Meg (although she was kinda ditzy this season) that are smart enough to figure that something isn’t right here. So many things can go wrong.

As far as I’m concern, if this is God’s reward, He can just shove it. I don’t care what’s most logical or what’s smart. It’s just cruel to make two people choose a life they always wanted, that they deserve, but with such a hefty price tag, especially after all that they’ve had to go through because of His “grand-effing-plan”.
(Oh, I’m so going to hell for this)

On a more superficial level, if Dean’s losing his looks he better look like Hugh-freaking-Jackman in return. And Sam…well, I don’t know of any good looking Native American but you catch my drift. *heart breaks at the thought of losing that smile and those dimples*
Lisa chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
That's an interesting look at how a post-apocalypse scenario could go. But I really hope it doesn't. I think God could just as easily start them over but them still be together.

After all that's separated them - or tried to - they deserve to be together in the end. Maybe a mind wipe/clean slate but still brothers closer than ever.
babyreaper chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
That was too sad, it broke my heart to read it, they shouldn't have said yes.
Thanks.
noturbaby chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Loved this, and hated it. :) I so badly want them to be happy, but, it breaks my heart that they would have to live apart in order for that to happen.
Excellent story, though.