Reviews for When Fate is Betrayed
firepokemonfox chapter 26 . 3/2
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Dizzy chapter 26 . 2/4
Is there any more? :3 I love it 3
Dizzy chapter 15 . 2/2
U could read it a few times after u write it? That might help
Dizzy chapter 14 . 2/2
Fyi yuki is 17... Even tho it's prob not men hand in this chapter thing...
jacii.vasquez chapter 26 . 1/2
plz make a chapter 2
a cat chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Guest chapter 26 . 8/28/2014
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Adfghjkkllaafg chapter 26 . 8/17/2014
Good
Guest chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
That was sooo goood you should become a writer.
siboney chapter 7 . 7/2/2014
This writing is amazingly wonderfuly written you shold become and author!
shylah kyer chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
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Animefreak0202 chapter 7 . 3/29/2014
I think I said this before but please excuse me but I THINK I WANT TO FUCKIN KILL ANY PERVERTS EVEN IF HE WASNT GOING TO RAPE ME I WILL STILL EFFIN KILL HIM AND TELL HE IS A TWO FACED BITCH TO WOMEN AND THAT HE DESERVES TO DIE! Sorry about the swearing but trust me, I will kill any pervert. Like Misaki from Kachiou Maid sama I am a huge feminist and think that sometimes men can think the wrong things about a girl and those men deserve to kicked in the balls, ass and head. Just like I did to a guy, and I wasn't even pissed off. I am not a force to be reckon with if I'm angry.
Animefreak0202 chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
I am officially reading this for the fifth time since this is a goddamn good fan fiction. But when KANAME said he felt like a big jerk I was like FINALLY! He really understands now. I am also very happy because in a few days is my birthday but I got an early present! And it was volumes 1- 10 for VAMPIRE KNIGHT! And it comes with an exclusive planner for 2011 but I am still very happy and is jumping up and down while reading this and eating on some delicious lint chocolate!
:D ;D XD :)
Animefreak0202 chapter 13 . 1/8/2014
I think Yagari is a really funny character and he has a soft spot:) but I just realised that Midori picks on Yuki but when Zero comes she acts all innocent and that makes me sick and if I was Zero I would say you can say sorry as many times as you want but I will still think of you as a bitch and a whore
But I really want this turned into an anime!
:)
Animefreak0202 chapter 12 . 1/8/2014
Kaname seems fine but MIDORI is another situation so are the gossipers but I can say one thing...they are all FUCKIN WHORES but anyway Your a really good writer
:)
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