|Reviews for When Fate is Betrayed|
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/10
I love the story but your chapter titles kinda spoil the whole chapter
| yuki22hime chapter 26 . 1/7
next chapter please
| Kirsten Scheck chapter 26 . 12/17/2016
I WANT TO READ MORE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/7/2016
Luv your story, please keep writing and I am willing to wait for new chapters
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
You started out strong and then flopped on your own face. Writing needs more detail.
| Paige Krauspe chapter 26 . 11/28/2016
Hi there I just want tell you that I love your writing and the story about Zero and Yuki beening together then her brother Kaname, so please keep writing, want to know more for thoes two together, just wish that the anime serises of Vampire Knight were your story about them cause I love them about. Thank you.
| Love it chapter 26 . 7/24/2016
Awesome Plz update
| lovefox chapter 15 . 6/24/2016
whaaaaaaa! i don't think your writing sucks! it's fucking awsome
| Dalla chapter 26 . 6/17/2016
Type your review here.I like it a lot it the best fanfiction I've ever read, please continue writing.
| lovefox101 chapter 24 . 6/6/2016
loved the coment at the end. hahahahaha
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/3/2016
Hey. Great story so far. Actually this is my second Time reading it! lol did u know that one of matsuri-sama's editors is named midori? Hehe I hate do you have Instagram?
| miarocksyou chapter 26 . 5/22/2016
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| Guest chapter 26 . 4/24/2016
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT MIRE THIS IS A REALY GOOD STORY WHY! PLZ MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ T_T T_TB.
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/23/2016
That was...horribly AWESOME!
| ShadowHunter chapter 26 . 4/14/2016
Plz make more PLZ I can't wait anymore.