Reviews for Team Naruto
narutohinata4life chapter 11 . 2/27
hell you should throw in him some fox ears and a fox tail and that word kawiii that people have used in fanfics where he has a tail
narutohinata4life chapter 6 . 2/27
causing tears in my eyes from reading this it is sad to me when naruto is killed in any fraction or way
narutohinata4life chapter 3 . 2/27
i love the sasugay chan thing i dont really get the suffiexs much but ya know fucking awsome
narutohinata4life chapter 2 . 2/27
weird tid bit with kyubii at the being kinda bipolarish or something but i like it
narutohinata4life chapter 1 . 2/27
nice chapter i like it so far but i am wondering how a more sadistic sasgay will be but anyway i loved the chapter and look foward to the others
Aramaki chapter 11 . 1/2
The inclusion of Rogue, Ichigo, and Luffy completely ruined this story. I can't look at Rogue's dialogue without incredible levels of irritation.
Majin-kun chapter 18 . 9/12/2014
...wow. That is some really fucked up history.
Majin-kun chapter 7 . 9/12/2014
Fucking shit! Not Wave again! Holy crap I hate that arc...worse thing is that I didn't even like it when it first came out in canon.

Oh well, your character development is genius...and your plot twist are unique so I AM looking forward to it to be honest.
Majin-kun chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
WTF? Kidnappers? Pedos?
Majin-kun chapter 3 . 9/11/2014
Holy crap! As appalled as I am by Sasuke's words...I freaking love him being like this! It's awesome...!

I'm a sucker for Narucentric stories, but an awesome Sasuke on the side never hurts. No Yaoi though, makes me highly uncomfortable.

Haha, never get bored of reading about whatever crazy personality people give Anko, unless she's really a nympho who does it with whoever asks...
Her getting all giddy about Naru calling her sensei is just amazingly hilarious!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Good Story keep it up
jhawk046 chapter 10 . 8/25/2014
Well I found this little gem and I am enjoying it. Please to add more to it as has been several years and it is good.
moneygreen932 chapter 25 . 4/2/2014
well first off i'll say this story is actually pretty good... it's interesting and well written.. has the right mix of comedy and action to make it entertaining and also has a little fluff to satisfy the romance fans... I personally think that adding Rouge, Luffy, and Ichigo was a mistake because it just made the story really weird and the fact that they have such a big role here it just kinda throws people for a loop well i know it did to me. but i kept reading on and got over it since i already had so much time and emotion in reading this story.. but it was kinda off and the fact that Naruto is dating one of them and now they have flashbacks dedicated to them (although thankfully it wasn't 2 chapters like Kurenai's) they just feel outta place and shifts the balance in the story but it's okay as you can get over it if you keep reading like i did eventually you get used to them..

Also good job on the harem like approach... it is realistic... all the girls fighting for position and the others not acknowledging their feelings to him but get jealous when he's around someone else... and that's another thing good job on making these girls real... i've seen other harems with Naruto where he flirts with girls in front of other girls who like him and their just okay with it like nothing happened and that is so totally unbelievable that it's not funny... it makes me wary on reading harem like fics with Naruto (not to mention the fact that Naruto would have a lot of difficulty dealing with one girl nvm multiple) but you did well here

i enjoyed the story and hope to see you update it soon while it's not the greatest and it's not quite as good as it was before out of universe characters got involved it's still quite entertaining and i'd like to see how you continue on with it
Ari The Fox chapter 22 . 3/24/2014
This was good, But what about Hina-hime?
Ari The Fox chapter 18 . 3/23/2014
Omg. That's so sad, I cried so hard when Gozen dies!
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