|Reviews for Fate: Eternal Vault|
| Logan- Murder of Crows chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Interesting, but there are some problems with it. I won't go into detail here, but if you want more details then you should message me. I encourage you to do so, in fact, and I'll try not to offend you. My goal would be to help you improve, not to berate you.
The good news is that you definitely did some research for this story, which I can get behind and give you credit for. You didn't quite use the most obvious Servant choices and I am happy you did not. I have my own ideas as to who the Servants might be... but I'm not saying anything definitive until I get a better picture.
I'd love to talk to you some more, so if you feel the same way, please reply!
Murder of Crows