Reviews for Pain of a Forgotten Paradise
APOLLOxx0909 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Sorry my review was short. I couldn't think of anything to say.
SONofAPOLLOx chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Nice poem.
Lololololol 1337 god chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Can you explain who Faust is first, because I couldn't remember until a while. And I'm an active Mapler. But good poem though. But it's kinda simple. I think you could do better.