excellent

the candles makes me picture the fanart by ladyofthemasque.. and love this story

One of the best things i have read on here. Wish you had done more!

Awesome ! I loved your story, interesting and very sensual, thank you for sharing and congratulations !

it finishex when the actual story and action happened...ugh. why...unsatisfying...wish there were cry emojis...ugh

great

Good God that was amazing!

I feel like this fic ended just when it was just starting to get good! I hope you have written a part two so I won't feel so unsatisfied with this abrupt ending. I found this to be really enjoyable fic, but like Hermione I am hoping for more. You have only yourself to blame, as you wrote it as such without a feeling of closure, and a heightening of expectations of a more fulfilling continuation. I guess you follow the precept of always leave them wanting more. Thank you for sharing!

Brilliant! (Smiles) Xxx

Fifty shades of Shape.. hoo boy. I'm already crying over the lack of a sequel

At first, as I do not make it a goal to find dom/sub stories, I was uncomfortable as hell. But the writing.. and I skipped to the end. It was. Satisfying? Nice. You drew in someone who doesn't usually hit up stories with this subject and I think I'll probably stick around. Thanks for the good read.

I thought there was going to be another chapter after this. it felt rather unfinished to me. very disappointed.

Thank you for sharing this delightful romp! The comparison is effortless, so please don't be offended when I compare this to "For the Potions Masters Amusement" - but this felt a LOT more fun to read. The sex and play scenes were JUST enough convey the action, while the "in head" descriptions did a pretty good job of letting us see her natural evolution. I love that she still has fire - any Hermione with a crushed spirit isn't really the girl we know and love.

Overall, you did a great job. Thank you so much for this wonderfully sweet, not-too-heavy tale of discovery and passion.

That was a delight to read, an amazing (and hot!) story :) I just wish that there was more, I'd love to know more and see what happens next. Thank you for the pleasure of reading it.

I've always found myself to quite like Ginny, she's always been a fun enjoyable character. It's been a recent change but I've found her rather easy to dislike now, even when she's being all sweetness and nice...not that she's been much like that yet here (though she has always been remarkably quick to hex first, lol) I like seeing the other road characters can take, seeing nice people become jerks and vice versa.