Reviews for What Would She See in Him?
Voice Number Seven chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
d'aww... I have to say, the end is my favorite. You should definitely keep writing.
aloha94 chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Great work! This was a heartbreaking and yet very true story. Ziva was very harsh in this episode. If she truly cared about Tony, she would realize how much her comments can hurt.
Cutezipie chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Amazing! Perfect! It's like I wrote it myself!

Much Love,

sakurablue13 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
the episode broke my heart

so did your story...

love it
AZGirl chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I liked this... I love how Tim admits to himself that sometimes he can be 'king of low blows'. Great job!
miki chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
love this story! great job!
betsmoe chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I loved Obsession and I really like this perspective on it. I thought Ziva was too harsh with Tony, too. He's an incredible guy, in my humble opinion. So glad your version of McGee recognizes that in his friend.
LN8866 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
That was so good! You descriptions of Tony were perfect & I could hear McGee the whole entire time (so you did good in keeping it in his voice!).

Loved the last paragraph-especially the last line..."Now its up to you to prove you're worthy of being her".