|Reviews for Forbidden Love|
| Kayla Morris chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
| SSJ 18 chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
Yes, I am still writing. Currently I am in the process of writing Chapter 4 though right now I am suffering from a bit of writers block but I will do the best I can to get it done and finished soon. Promise! :)
| robinwhoody chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Hallo again! Whats happened to chapter 4? Are you still writing? Please say you do! Im on madmedjennas side on this, patience is a virtue but Im not a saint. I cant wait to read the next chapter! You really do know how to keep your readers guessing and wanting more so pleeeaaaase update soon
| Super Saiyan Juuhachi chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
I am glad that you want to know more about my story and about what has truly happened with David. Honestly, it gives me a great sense of accomplishment that I have done my job in keeping adding just enough suspense to keep you interested and guessing of what will happen next. For this reason it may be a little awhile before we learn anything more about David because right now that Darlene and Molly have reunited the story has really just started and wanted to focus on things with them fpr the time being but I will add a small scene just to ease your curiosity on the matter but it may you have to wait a little for the next chapter. I haven't yet made a plan of what I want to happen in the fourth chapter, well the beginning part I know what I want to happen but the second half still has yet to be developed so you will just have to be patient until then.
Super Saiyan Juuhachi
| madmedjenna chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Patience is a virtue and now it just paid of. Thanks for the update but you really are keeping the card of Davids life tight to your chest. Is he ok? Is he in trouble, did you really go to his Dads or run away? Light the dark for us there in your next chapter if you have mercy on your readers! Thanks again keep em coming
| Super Saiyan Juuhachi chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
The third chapter will be up soon, couldn't tell you exactly when though because I am having some trouble writing it at the moment. But I can tell you, that there will be a brief flashback in it that will explain what happen to David and to where he is at now. So you have that to look foward to. Something an old temporary character who had a recurring role on the series will be coming back in this chapter and then for the rest of the story. You may be surprised who it will be. Anyway, I hope this clears things up and I hope to hear from you soon.
Super Saiyan Juuhachi
| robinwhoody chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Hallo, I was just checking in to see if you are still planning on updating? I saw you wrote some else that you are writing but thats been a while, so any chance the next chapter is gonna make it to publishing? I really would like where you are going with this story and whats been happeing to David.
| madmedjenna chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
hallo again and sorry it took me so long to respond. Im looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for not giving up! If you need someone to feed back or bounce ideas off Id be happy to help where I can. Just stop torturing us and finish that 3 chapter ;)
| Super Saiyan Juuhachi chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I appreciate your kind words and yes I am planning on continuing the story. Actually as we speak, I am in the process of writing the third chapter. This one will fall more into my own creativity again because obviously, Darlene never went back to High School again in the series so this something as a writer that I love is getting to create a whole new enviornment and make whatever I want happen, that is the beauty of being an author you have the power and ability to do whatever you want. What you have no power with in reality, you can make happen in fantasy.
The only difficult thing with all of this was trying to improvise and adjust things according to what I needed for my story can prove not to be so easy when you are changing scenes and eliminating jokes. All though I am pretty happy with how things have turned out so far with the story and how I have been able to change things up a little bit is quite fullfiling me. Anyway, I am glad that I have got your interest and I look forward to your next review when the third chapter is finally up.
| madmedjenna chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
Hi I just found this story and was wondering if you are still updating it. I really like it and it would be great if you are continuing it! Love to know how David is doing and if he is ok!
| Amy chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
Another wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work!
| kelly chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
great chapter! can't wait to see what happens next!
| Scarlett Ibis chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Good job, I loved the first chapter. Nice concept, I love that you're writing about a what if in Roseanne.
I love Roaseanne personally, and I still acn't believe Darlene and David wound up together after it all. I just felt like, in real life, that just does't happen. Darlene' always been my favorite character and I thank you for supplying me with an awesome story to read.
Hmmm... so as a critique, I will say that I'd like to see more dialogue next time around, but I love the beginning paragraph especially the "People who did not have any friends or family to share in the importance of this night with and were forced to spend it alone" part, 'cause it's definetly alluding to the main character.
Please keep writing, as soon as you post I'll read!
| Amy chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Great beginning! I can't wait for the second chapter!