Reviews for A Patrol Changes Everything
wandamarie chapter 8 . 7/18/2010
wow it was a good one and sad thanks for sharing your talents with all of us
Sunny Book Lover chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
Wow! Good chappie. Wonder how long it will take to convince Harry that he is normal? :)
ReachingTheLost777 chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
great chapter

please update soon XP
SylvaDragon chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I love the idea of Albus patrolling the corridors like this, it's just how I see him. I wonder how I've missed finding this story till now ?

He is just so perfectly in character and you write him wonderfully well. Aw poor Harry being so shy, it's an interesting take on his character, and I love how albus watches over him. In case you haven't guessed by now I'm obsessed with Albus. :D And I adore stories where he's like a mentor or grandfather to people. And the way Albus deals with the injured Harry is just wonderful, so perfect, I love it. I'm very interested to see who did this to him but it's 3.00am here so I must wait till another day to read more.
cyiusblack chapter 7 . 7/16/2010
update soon
ceara1888 chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
another wonderful chapter. one of the more realistic stories Ive read so far. I hope you update very soon.
Aelirenn chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
I just love your Severus. Poor Harry, but Sev made me laugh with his list of Harry's responsibilities.. "annoy me" lol. Can't wait for the next!
All The Pretty Horses chapter 2 . 7/16/2010
I like this a lot so far. It really is a refreshing change from all the Manipulative!Dumbledore/Dumbledore bashing stories out there. Great job.
usernames are for losers chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
Nice, I look forward to more
RebeccaRoy chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
Wow, this Harry is most unsettling, the poor child does not understand he was abused and he is not a servant. You know I think the best thing to do is have him read the story Cinderella, seriously, I think that could help him see he has gone from servant to prince as it were.
Global Conquest-er chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
Awesome, as always.

Love this fic with a strange intensity; thank you for updating!
riiaofwind chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
brilliant as always thank you Cant wait to read what will happen next And how about harrys magic will they be suprised to find that harry actually have quite a lot magic- or has he
GinaStar chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
Excellent story!
GraveDigger Resurrection chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
This. Story. Is. Awesome. I don't think you understand. If I were to get to request one story for someone to write, it...would be this story. I just...it's so much hurt/comfort and angst and Dumbledore/Harry/Snape fluffery goodness! If this fic were a person, I would marry it. I might try to, anyway. o.o

Don't stop writing this please or I'll cry. A bunch. I might drown in tears, and you pretty much don't want that on your conscience.
Palerose1171 chapter 8 . 7/16/2010
Hey, Just wanted to say what a great story this is, I love how Harry and Albus are slowly getting closer. Its great to see them all working out their problems
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