Make another please I need to know what happens please I'm begging you

I like it so far, its hard to stop reading when i have to go to class lol. I think that it would be cute if you added in a percy/nico start to a relationship cause they are so loyal to each other and already so close. also it would give nico a little break from all the traumas.

I loved it so much!

I loved reading this and one of my friends read it too and she loved it.
I was wondering if you could tell me where I might read the more of it. I really want to know what happens. If you could get this published, i think that lots of people would like it.
Keep going! it's really good and i can't wait to read more.

Wow this is probably the longest fan fix I've ever read but I'm am very impressed with it. I have no idea where you could have come up with all this and your writing skill is killer I am constantly looking words up and I guess you like the use of them. Overal I think your work is very pleasurable and hope to finish your story soon.

Ps: have you ever considered a writing career because I would so read your books especially if there about mythology

would Anubis and nico be adopted half brothers if Osiris was hades counterpart like pluto?

Hello! me again. commented earlier. Just wanted to say, I was fangirling on this a lot so good job! You should right a second one... (I know im REALLY REALLY late, so if you have, email me a link for it! :D

THIS IS SO GGOD NOW IM ADDICTED. THANKS

Excelente! Is there is sequel? I see it complete, the ending seems to mean a cliffhanger for a sequel though. Are you still writing fanfiction?

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Awesome! This is now my second favorite story... (please write a sequel if you haven't already, sorry,I didn't bother to check yet cause I just finished reading this)

I love you. Seriously THANK YOU SO MUCH! I have been searching for this story for ages and I now have found it written to a standard worthy of a professional writer! Thank you.

"Or maybe it's exactly what we need," said Percy then sent his thoughts to the fish. Hey guys? What's up?

Son of the sea god!

He's talking to us!

Someone answer him!

Hi!

Hi!

Hi!

He asked us a question!

He asked what is up.

The surface! The surface of the water is up!

"What are you doing?" asked Carter.

"Making some new friends."

Friends! He wants to be friends!

The son of the sea god wants to be our friend!

"Percy . . . are you sure that's a good idea?"

Percy nodded. "Sure it is. These guys are nice."

He thinks we're nice!

The son of the sea god thinks we're nice!

I laughed so hard at that! I love this story, it was amazing to read! I also love the way you portrayed Nico!

This story was AWESOME. I loved how you made Nico a host, especially to Anubis, but honestly, who else could he host? I personally would've liked to see more example of Nico's newly enhanced power, but I understand why he was tired all the time. Also, maybe some more epic ness from Percy, and the Kanes, but this story was epic enough all by its self. Perhaps, were you to continue this, maybe take them down into Tartarus or Duat? (Preferably Tartarus :)) show a darker side to Nico and give rise to the truth that all of Hades children are a little unhinged? Anyhow, I loved this story and the way you wrote it. On that note I will contradict myself in saying that a little more imagery would help bring it off the digital page. Again, this was awesome!

Ohh, this is a good beginning...