|Reviews for Total Pokemon Island|
| Qwertypip chapter 1 . 5/27
Lol Wheelbarrow-Diglett for the win! Will we ever get to see Diglett's body? ?
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/11
Okay, so far I'm LOVING this Fanfiction! At first I was kinda skeptical, but then it started to grow on me! I noticed instantly that the challenges follow that of the show mostly, but I'm wondering if the Pokemon follow respective characters as well, some of them do, others don't, and that is the only thing confusing me. If each Pokemon has(had) a respective character, who would they be? A list would be amazing! Thank you and I look forward to continuing this very entertaining fanfic! :)
| Skyress1 chapter 34 . 10/20/2015
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnOkay... that was a cliche. So the little scared guy one it. How unexpected. Maybe if I had not read it here... well it would not change anything. You probably just copy and paste. It's rather visible to be honest. Well played, Dark Amphitere. But it does not change me feelings about the story. The start was brilliant. It was getting even better half-way through. But for me, it went down hill as soon as Weavil got eliminated and Mewtwo was stuck at Looser's Island. And it got worse with the elimination of the last two players I liked. I never liked Clefairy or that too-random-and-food-obsessed Piloswine. And Gloom isn't that much better. Actually the last one did not have a character of their own in a way.
| Skyress1 chapter 33 . 10/20/2015
Seriously? A piloswine and an Oddish... this better be worth it.
| Skyress1 chapter 32 . 10/20/2015
What the -seriously long censor-?! Do you think I read this -long censor- to get another of my bets eliminated... if no one else hates this chapter ...THE I -CENSORED- do!
Clefairy should not be in the challenge I know she's evil. Swinub isn't exactly competent enough and Oddish is as much a coward as anyone.
Seriously?! Why the heck would you Hurrah? For a freaky fairy type? Pfft... if Mewtwo was here, I think that it would have ran differently. And Cacturne would not have turned evil and he would not convince anyone to vote against their friends and then he would not vote for himself and the Oddish and Swinub would have realised what Clefairy was doing... but Cacturne was right about the fact that Clefairy would not want to have Swinub with them. .
| Skyress1 chapter 31 . 10/20/2015
Who the -censored- does that reader think she is. I would not kill Mewtwo ever, since he was just really angry and all... no wonder when he has to work for that Mew and most of the people hated him since the game started pretty much and no-one ever agrees with him. But yeah... the revenge of Banette was still a teansy bit funny...
Oh shnaps! no one picked Weavil... I guess it's fitting but...
Hmm lol primeape and rhydon came back! Tough luck!
Hey! Clefair y should have been kicked out! If Weavil was she should have been kicked out straight afterwards.
| Skyress1 chapter 30 . 10/20/2015
What's with calling him a 'purple punk'?! - -censored- know's that even those sweets didn't sweeten the beginning...
Well at least their in that miserable dump of a place and Banette had it in for him... Okay the 'no guarantees' made me smile but only slightly. *sigh* won't be the same though...
Okay... so it was worth it... but was it worth getting rid of Weavil. I bet the other people bribed you into kicking her out! And I bet the all voted against her... well Banette you palyed a good game... but what about Weavil... she has nothing. Everyone out of here seemed to at least do something or gain or achieve something. She has no hope and she probably does not believe in anyone. I think... the winner should be Cacturne then... since Weavil hasn't managed it.
| Skyress1 chapter 29 . 10/20/2015
What the F- -censored- are you telling me I didn't -censored- read this to see Weavil come out so fast.
-censored- -censored- -CENSORED- NOW THERE IS NO ONE I WISH TO WIN SHE COULD HAVE AT LEAST FREAKING MADE IT TO THE LAST THREE!
| Skyress1 chapter 28 . 10/20/2015
But hehe... Mewtwo and Banette are on to each other yet again... Loving it!
Well Weavil is still in the game - Yass!
| Skyress1 chapter 27 . 10/20/2015
I don't know why but I hope it's Weavil who wins. Poor Charmeleon... No!
Lol - Mewtwo is seriously getting on Banette's nerves.. first all that and now the baseball bat! And now he's planning something else.. probably received his Evil Sleep.
Lol... Charmeleon just had to do that!
And Clefairy? You're evil!
At least Weavil stayed and Charmeleon finally got to be free and with Gabite which is a bonus...
| Skyress1 chapter 26 . 10/20/2015
Why? Why Gardevoir... but I guess it had to be done...
I agree... Weavil is SO much better than Kadabra or Lopunny...
Ooh man! Gabite x Charmeleon - I SHIP!
And I think there should by a reason to why she's evil - the best of evil has a reason. Lopunny was a jealous bitch, who wanted money so bad she was blind to the consequences. Kadabra had started rather clean but most liely by seeing his smartness and skills he used them because of his spineless cowardice and the fact that he was too selfish. But Weavil? What is the source of her evil? Why did she turn so? I'm sorry for Gardevoir, but it seeems as if Mewtwo and Cacturne are friends...I hope the boys won't annoy her too much on the island...
Cacturne would not be happy.
Great own Banette you are on a roll! But that is not fair... Mewtwo isn't the most evil of the pair... Mew is.
Mew is seriously different. First, he's a well you know who. Second, he's ridiculously annoying and third, he's evil. I hope that Weavil will stay longer... this place needs some evil apart from Mew and the forever-arguing Mewtwo...
| Skyress1 chapter 25 . 10/20/2015
Oh poor Scizor... but phew... at least it wasn't Cacturne.
Lol... Mewtwo's angry again... And LOL Again... this conflict is getting exciting by the minute! And I think Mew owned him! But I don't think Mewtwo is ugly... just short-tempered...
What?! A Bidoof made her quit?! Who knew?
Well that was luck for Cacturne... but I certainly hope Weavil's game does not end there... I actually find that Weavil somewhat makes people want to try harder and cooperate more...
Plus what would Houndoom do afterwards... she's the only immediate threat and challenge and I think that without her the pokemon will think there are less threats and it will be easier for someone pretending to be nice to vote them all out... P.S - she's one of my favourites despite the evil she had done - after all there were pokemon who were worse.
| Skyress1 chapter 24 . 10/20/2015
Poor Gengar... I feel sorry for him have to go through that... that was mean!
Oh and I started reading this story on Wattpad, but I am too impatient to wait and when I saw that someone had read this story on Fanfiction I decided that I would go and read it here. I will most likely finish reading it on Wattpad too...
And Gengar ... hotness isn't everything. For one you got to be patient.
Lol... Mewtwo's on it again! But don't worry Banette you'll get back on him!
| Zek chapter 14 . 8/30/2015
Zoroark/Zorua would have been PERFECT for this challenge. They ARE the illusion pokemon after all.
| Zek chapter 11 . 8/30/2015
Mew has another clone? See paragraph 5 sentence 7.