|Reviews for Total Pokemon Island|
| Roran the Zoroark chapter 34 . 12/15/2016
M.V.S. Most valuable story. no joke
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/26/2016
Very well written
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2016
Poop poop poopy poop!
| dave huijbens chapter 2 . 11/26/2016
rlly electrode is first out :/
well go shinx and wooper
| dave huijbens chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
WHY ELECTRODE? VOLTORB IS MY FAVOURITE POKEMON. Welp im rooting for electrode and i hate digglet
| Guest chapter 34 . 11/18/2016
Rereading this again and I have to say it's great. Plots, drama, twists, great characters and creative challenges. Awesome!
| dragonrush chapter 7 . 10/6/2016
Zubat deserved it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I like ninetales.
| Qwertypip chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Lol Wheelbarrow-Diglett for the win! Will we ever get to see Diglett's body? ?
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/11/2016
Okay, so far I'm LOVING this Fanfiction! At first I was kinda skeptical, but then it started to grow on me! I noticed instantly that the challenges follow that of the show mostly, but I'm wondering if the Pokemon follow respective characters as well, some of them do, others don't, and that is the only thing confusing me. If each Pokemon has(had) a respective character, who would they be? A list would be amazing! Thank you and I look forward to continuing this very entertaining fanfic! :)
| Skyress1 chapter 34 . 10/20/2015
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnOkay... that was a cliche. So the little scared guy one it. How unexpected. Maybe if I had not read it here... well it would not change anything. You probably just copy and paste. It's rather visible to be honest. Well played, Dark Amphitere. But it does not change me feelings about the story. The start was brilliant. It was getting even better half-way through. But for me, it went down hill as soon as Weavil got eliminated and Mewtwo was stuck at Looser's Island. And it got worse with the elimination of the last two players I liked. I never liked Clefairy or that too-random-and-food-obsessed Piloswine. And Gloom isn't that much better. Actually the last one did not have a character of their own in a way.
| Skyress1 chapter 33 . 10/20/2015
Seriously? A piloswine and an Oddish... this better be worth it.
| Skyress1 chapter 32 . 10/20/2015
What the -seriously long censor-?! Do you think I read this -long censor- to get another of my bets eliminated... if no one else hates this chapter ...THE I -CENSORED- do!
Clefairy should not be in the challenge I know she's evil. Swinub isn't exactly competent enough and Oddish is as much a coward as anyone.
Seriously?! Why the heck would you Hurrah? For a freaky fairy type? Pfft... if Mewtwo was here, I think that it would have ran differently. And Cacturne would not have turned evil and he would not convince anyone to vote against their friends and then he would not vote for himself and the Oddish and Swinub would have realised what Clefairy was doing... but Cacturne was right about the fact that Clefairy would not want to have Swinub with them. .
| Skyress1 chapter 31 . 10/20/2015
Who the -censored- does that reader think she is. I would not kill Mewtwo ever, since he was just really angry and all... no wonder when he has to work for that Mew and most of the people hated him since the game started pretty much and no-one ever agrees with him. But yeah... the revenge of Banette was still a teansy bit funny...
Oh shnaps! no one picked Weavil... I guess it's fitting but...
Hmm lol primeape and rhydon came back! Tough luck!
Hey! Clefair y should have been kicked out! If Weavil was she should have been kicked out straight afterwards.
| Skyress1 chapter 30 . 10/20/2015
What's with calling him a 'purple punk'?! - -censored- know's that even those sweets didn't sweeten the beginning...
Well at least their in that miserable dump of a place and Banette had it in for him... Okay the 'no guarantees' made me smile but only slightly. *sigh* won't be the same though...
Okay... so it was worth it... but was it worth getting rid of Weavil. I bet the other people bribed you into kicking her out! And I bet the all voted against her... well Banette you palyed a good game... but what about Weavil... she has nothing. Everyone out of here seemed to at least do something or gain or achieve something. She has no hope and she probably does not believe in anyone. I think... the winner should be Cacturne then... since Weavil hasn't managed it.