Reviews for Zap?
OriginalCopy chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Zomg dude this is so cute! I wanna play zap now XD I love this story, I love you, I love your writing and I love Gatorgirl1999 too! What can I say, I'm a loving person :') Write more soon, this stuff is awesome! good work bro! :D
ventus4ever chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
DragoNik chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Lucky roxas and namine XDD! this game is gr8...if you're not the zapped one XD!
Harukauranus chapter 1 . 8/26/2010

this was such a cute one shot!

I loved it. wow...brought back memories of zap...haha
mattjesse chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Never heard of zap until now. Hehe... that'll be a fun back-to-school game.
Random Romantasist 999 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I could TOTALLY deal with that zap XD
star.everlasting chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA xD I cracked up at 2:30 am xD
Aaaaaaaall the Irons chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
This was cute~! I zap my friends all the time... *evil laugh* I zapped my friend before and she had to say "I love you" LOL
LoveLife45 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Haha, this is sooo funny! I really love this one-shot...hahaha! What a great game for Namine and her to be embarrassed! XD
Omega Keyblade Wolf chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Wowz...go Namine! I'm gonna get my frends to play this! I've already thought of somethin mwahahaha! Great story! 20 out of 10! Two thumbs up!
saix-puppy chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I loved this story!
Gatorgirl1999 chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
okay, i was going to review this yesterday. i was reading about half way when my laptop shut down. I was breaking into to 'NOOO!'s and crying and my dad told me to get ahold of myself and he'd get the charger but only if i stopped. well that shut me up. he said that if it happened again he would take the computer away XD. lol, i LOVE LOVE ur reasons and the story. this is an amazing story. i've never heard of this game before though... i love how she had to say that XD perfect story. i could hug you to death XD *squeezes u till u die XD*
OphleiaS chapter 1 . 5/8/2010

it was pretty messed up when hayne zapped olette too, but I loved the ending

mspink93 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Am I the first to review? YES!

It was so cute! But you had some typos in it, nothing major, just thought that I'd let you know.

Roxas and Namine really are a cute couple, aren't they? But it was adorable, and an ingenous (?) plan. I especially liked when Hayner zapped Olette to say Namine, and it was a chain of dialogue for a little while. It was great D