Reviews for Villains and Heroes and Those InBetween
pigows chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I love this! My favorite FF fanfic!
AwesomeAuror chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I kinda like this.

Some sentences can definitely be re-worked to flow smoother, but other than that, it's pretty good. I love the metaphors and comparisons you used, and everyone was remarkably in character. I could literally hear Lloyd speaking. Great job!

It's a shame we won't get to see the love triangle progress. Darn you, ABC!
Solivagant chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Mm, I loved this! I liked the whole idea of it, heroes vs. villains, and who belongs to which category... That Lloyd&Olivia scene was adorable, too.

This line might be my favorite: "...not quite looking at her, as if not looking would make it less real." Or maybe those last couple lines... Actually, I'm just in love with all of it!

Very well written, too:)