|Reviews for Our Daughter Our Little Angel|
| leahlilly215 chapter 34 . 2/24
YOU ARE EVIL! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED THIS IN 3 WHOLE YEARS! HOW CAN YOU JUST STOP?! I WISH THAT THERE WERE A WAY FOR ME TO CONTACT YOU DIRECTLY BECAUSE I HAVE NO DOUBT IN MY MIND THAT YOU WILL NEVER SEE THIS REVIEW OR PICK THIS STORY UP! I WARNED YOU AND NOW I'M UPSET.
you made me love it :(
| leahlilly215 chapter 35 . 2/24
Sooo I was searching through for stories that had the most follows instead of who had updated recently and I found your story. After reading chapter 2 I decided to look at the chapter list to see if it ended or if it was forgotten about. I read your Hiatus reasoning and I'm torn on whether or not to continue reading knowing it will probably not get finished. I think you're an amazing writer for someone who's just started. I'm hoping that you'll see the email that this review will send you and try and pick it up because I'm going to keep reading. And if I get attached you will definitely get an earful after I'm done.
YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!
| Ria99 chapter 35 . 2/13
Can you please finish the story? I want to know the ending! You're a really good writer.
| Romitri forever chapter 22 . 2/8
I know it was ages ago you wrote this but when I read this I play "Love Me" Katy Perry on repeat !
| AriaBelikov chapter 34 . 2/8
Please Continue this story! I'm dying to know who saved Kady. Was It Rose? Dimitri? or someone completely unexpected? I gotta know man!
| Danya's girl chapter 35 . 2/2
Plz plz plz finish this story! I first read this story a year ago nd I've been waiting for an update it's a great story plz finish! :/ I wanna kno how it ends :)
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/9
The only reason I read this fanfic was so I vould read about how Rose would tell Dimitri that Kaddy was his daughter. Now that she did I get stuck with to be continued crap. This fanfic is so freaking long, pointless, and utterly terrible. If I could go back in time I would tell my self to never read it. Biggest waste of time.
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/9
I SWEAR TO GOD IF ROSE DOSEN'T TELL DIMITRI THAT HE'S KADDY'S FARTHER I'M GOING TO LOSE IT
| bebekids5 chapter 35 . 1/10
omg I love the story not happy that there as not been a update I would really love it if there was one soon please update
| Sokdrwrhero chapter 35 . 1/5
I do not review... I'm that Fanfiction user that goes through the completed fanfics and browses fics written years ago and then either closes them out (or if they're really good) favorites it so I can find it later.
I decided early on - chapter two - that I was going to review the shit out of this fic.
So here we are, 35(ish) chapters later...
I thought the worse cliff-hanger I'd get from the story is Dimitri not finding out... THIS IS SO MUCH WORSE! XD
Come back :)
This story is flawless-I absolutely love it! And the plot within the plot within the plot-Sweet Jesus you're an amazing writer. The way this story flows... I'm amazed. And this was 2(ish) years ago! I would so totally read your book if you published.
I was going to review each chapter, but I'll just do it in one review:
1.) I completely agree with your dislike (if this is still the case) of Lissa. The fact that she's a Moroi and raised with certain beliefs aside, she complains a lot. Her double standards annoy me; on one hand, she's all for people treating Rose with respect and telling people to treat dhampirs like people and not property-but then constantly freaks out on Rose constantly and basically pees on her to mark her territory. But enough of Lissa ranting xD
2.) Thank you for not being like 90% of the writers on this site :) I am completely in love with Scarlett - You not only gave her a unique personality, but you cared enough to keep her interesting, made her a realistic character in the story, and didn't go out of the realm of VA.
3.) Thank you for not participating in the sport known as 'Tasha-Bashing' xD. Now I know (from your A/Ns) that this fanfic was started before BP, and halted soon after LS(ish)... So I know that Tasha hadn't flipped out yet- but a lot of people completely hate Tasha, just because she fell for Dimitri. Which, hell, you're supposed to. I like that you made her a background character, and Rose was jealous of her, but didn't hate her. Rose liked her even throughout the books (until she shot her xD)
4.) Hmmm... What next...? Abe. Sweet. Jesus. I love his storyline. In fact, let's just cut to it- I love the fact that every important character has a storyline that you stick to, and use to weave the story into what it is.
5.) Kady... I love her to pieces- and am grateful that you didn't focus too much on the how... It just became fact and that was that.
6.) Reactions - They were realistic (as realistic as possible anyway).
7.) I'm probably missing something, but when I re-read it (which'll happen sooner or later), I will re-review.
I don't even know if you get these anymore xD and if you don't update, that's cool, my imagination can probably finish it for me :) though I would love to see how it pans out in your words
| elijahlover chapter 35 . 12/31/2013
Love it hope the new baby's awesome xx happy new yr plz update xx
| elijahlover chapter 11 . 12/31/2013
Human! Blond hair brown eyes! Soz I no this was written ages ago but I had to write that xx
| Guest chapter 35 . 12/7/2013
Is there any possibility you will finish this story? I was absolutely loving it!
| ShirleySara chapter 34 . 11/25/2013
I read all of the chapters in just one night, they are really good, so PLEASE UPDATE ?! :D
| Kitty chapter 35 . 11/15/2013
Please come back!