Reviews for Take Me On The Floor
Free2LoveFree chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Quick and hot... great one shot
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
:)(: Well...HOT DAYMN, that was so amazingly sexy.
Terrific story. :)(:
Shoowiebab chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
HOT ! You made my day.
Cloudstrife3180 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
wow. haha id kinda like to see that become something.
SwanQueen4tw chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
that was really good. great job.
MayaCullen20 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
This story is SO hot!

And I really, really, REALLY love this song,

thank you for using it!
Jezikial chapter 1 . 6/11/2010

Oh and so I don't sound too perverted, fantastically written also :) I loved the flow and kind of...rhythm to the story. It was kind of hard hitting and full of passion. You did a great job. Also you didn't use more words than necessary and described everything really well without it being cluttered. The emotions and feeling was great too. Great work.
Risque Raven chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I am one of the very few that haven't been sucked in by the whole Twilight Syndrome (not to be confused as me not liking it, it's just I am not as crazy obsessed as most people) but this is a REALLY Hott story! *fans face*

Risque Raven
luna4917 chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
DAMN! That was HOT!
0891 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
That was really, really hot. Enough said. xD
WritingFanatic08 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Wicked! Hot! Lovely! Great job :)
madforkigo chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I agree with "Thy Emo Vampyre", you should continue this.

Looking forward to more. :)
Thy Emo Vampyre chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
great lemon u should continue this though
NandinhaMa chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Very great
FaBAMF chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
wow, friggen awesome! :D Love taking chances and this was nice to read whilst you take ya break
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