It began really strong and I loved this story, but with every new chapter it got worse...too much very extended background story of too much pairings and it got a little bit boring. The main idea was good, but are Luffy and Nami talking about Sanji kissing her? And why did he do it when he has Vivi? Wtf?

First lemon was a couple that is not even on the crew why?

So zoro and robin , identified they liked each other and got it on no drama , yet luffy and Nami is the same old drawn out cringefest

Was enjoying this until Nami got kidnapped then the story ended, ffs!

Wooo finally , good chapter

As Johnny and Yosaku would say , so close ,almost had her

What a waste of time on your part and mine .

And just before the moment they were going to do something ,fml what a waste of time

What the fuck did you make her kiss sanji for , completely ruined the fucking story you fucking idiot !

Cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next part if the A/N at the end of the chapter is to be believed. Looking forward to this revival!

pls continue SOOO good

I only ever had three ships in One Piece. Here comes ship four blossoming. Nojiko and Ace are too adorable in this chapter! I really liked it.

hope your still continuing this story

Can you please continue!

Please continue this. I wanna see more! Don't give up on this fic!