|Reviews for Mina's Heart of Darkness|
| General Schemer chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Been meaning to get out a review on this for a while now.
I know little of Sailor Moon but I'll give it a go.
The story is short but quite engaging with short punchy sentences
and sharp staccato lines - much like a martial arts fight.
Overall: a very well choreographed fight scene with multiple
I wonder about Mina though. She gives a few hints of her mental
status – but not many. It seems possible, she struggles with her fears
as much as her enemies, opponents, or whatever. But, I think the reader
would like to know more. What makes her tick – her mental clockwork and her
Kinda like 'Heroine' asked – how did she get there. What makes her fight these
guys. Other than the obvious: they're just baddies.
I know it's difficult to get the protagonist to give off personal tidbits
during a fight to the death, but it works wonders if handled correctly.
So – not bad, very good actually. And why aren't you writing more?
| AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Ducks-Go-Aflack, please make a petition directly to the Aflac company and try to get them to bring Gilbert Gottfried back as the voice of the duck!
| Heroine of the Valley chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
I decided to check out one of your stories after your PM. I don't understand why Mina is in this tomb, unless she really is dreaming.
I do like the detail and how the story flowed though. Kind of scary.
| Chibi-Moon Lover chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Wow. That was really good. A little wierd, though.