Reviews for To Feel Human |
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![]() ![]() I definitely liked it. WOW! |
![]() ![]() love it :3 |
![]() ![]() keep on going keep on going keeeeeeep on going |
![]() ![]() keep on going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww... ADORBS |
![]() ![]() (I think I'm gonna keep this name lol) Awesome oneshot :D I thought it was super fluffy! And I LOVE ASTRO/CORA FLUFF/CONNECTION/BOND/EVERYTHING XD You tinkled my fancy |
![]() ![]() This is a very lovely story you have here. The only problems are the back story and the details. Those who like the stories here have already seen the movie, so the back story was a bit excessive. Remember to respect the intelligence of your audience. To fill up the gap, a little more sensory detail would have been nice. This was good, don't get me wrong. But I would like to have seen a little more of what you are capable of as a writer. You say you may continue it. Please do, General. I am here should you need assistance and I wish you many magical words along the way. -Magician Irono |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww that's so sweet! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its extreemly sweet. I almost cried with Cora :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() (0o0) awwwwww Failing-san(not shure if that sounds right,maby you'd perfer General-san?) this is amazing i love it!(0o0) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First sentence grabbed me. I love what you say about Astro's eyes, 'cause I thought the same thing. |
![]() ![]() that was amazing so sweet it made me cry,not just cora id like to read more |
![]() ![]() that was amazing so sweet it made me cry,not just cora id like to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute as a carebear :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally continue! Please! I'll review every chapter! |