Reviews for Paranoia: Demeter's Story
demeterlol chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Hello? Anybody home? Just wanted to say:The next chapter WAY is overdue! Please come back soon!
demeterlol chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
PLEASE do the next chapter SOON!
Ljuba chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
nice work...it's a bit confused ...just as lovers are! and I like Cori and Tanto...I didn't understant what Cori whispered...uff I think I have to wait for the next chapter to find out it,...right?
Jelinzer chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I wrote this story. Reviews are just cool. I apologize if you think we shouldn't publish it on a cliffhanger like that. Oh well. That's your problem, not mine. A little is better than none, right?

Right?

Please add "right" under any review you write. Oh, and one more thing, if you think it's crap, good for you, I don't want to hear it so please just don't review. (When will we learn?)