|Reviews for Slaying The Dragon|
| chelsea1234 chapter 6 . 7/21/2010
Wonderful although very sad chapter. I'm off to read the :)
| chelsea1234 chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
OMG! Poor Timmy. I hope he accepts some help from the gang soon. Great chapter! Thanks :)
| chelsea1234 chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Oh! It's looking like Tim's family is not what it appeared to be. I hope Sarah and her Mom trust the team enough to let them in so they can help Tim. Great Chapter! Thanks :)
| GibbsRules chapter 6 . 7/18/2010
OMG! This chapter was awesome ... and so sad! (you were right about the tissue warning!). Poor McGee believing that he's the team 'screw up' and the others (especially Gibbs and Tony) don't want him around. Glad that Ducky is managing to get McGee to talk and respond to him a little bit although it was so sad when McGee wouldn't hug Ducky back!. Loved how Ducky copied Gibbs's way of getting through to Tony by tapping McGee on his chin to get his attention. Looking forward to the next chapter to see the reaction of both Gibbs and Tony to the news that Ducky is about to deliver as to the reason why McGee won't see either of them! No doubt there will be lots of guilt on Gibbs's part!...and Tony's. I notice McGee didn't include Ziva so does he view her the same as he views himself .. an 'outsider' on the team?. If so, perhaps he will let Ziva help him too. Please update as soon as you can. :D
| GibbsRules chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
OMG! Just caught up with the last two chapters!. Poor McGee! ... i hope he will not be angry with his mother when he realises that Gibbs and the team have come to visit him. Despite what he thinks he wants, Tim really needs the team right now to help him get through this. Hopefully, they can manage to convince him of this in the time limit that Vance has given them!. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
| xenascully chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
nice update! you know me; ill be impatiently awaiting the next chapter as usual ;)
| STLFAN chapter 4 . 7/16/2010
Thanks for the update, more please!
| GibbsRules chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
OMG! This was an awesome chapter!. Poor McGee! and poor Gibbs having it spelled out to him about his treatment of Tim compared to the others!... and his sinking feeling when talking to McGee's mother. Loved the talk between Gibbs and Ducky and the fact that Ducky has talked him into doing something. Come on Gibbs, go with your famous 'gut instinct' and go sort this out!. Loved Gibbs's description of Vance as the pitbull!. Looking forward to the next chapter!. Please update when you can! :D
| meegeesgeek chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
So i just read the first official chapter of what will probably be another great epic, and you have me hooked already. I liked the long lead up to the bombshell that Vance bestowed upon the agents. I mean Gibbs sinking feeling, and not being able to reach Tim-probably because he had used his one call after being detained to call Gibbs, to the others on the team slowly fretting about where Tim could be. then the bombshell of him committing murder knocked me for a loop-wonder who he killed, and I am sure that it was self defense because Timmy never hurts anyone! Hope Sarah is okay, and that the team can meet up with Tim! Cannot wait to read more of this and see what scary and probably heartbreaking secrets Timmy has in his closet. Update soon but I understand that you have many other stories that you are working on!
I have also just read chapter two and i am hooked even more! The hardest part of the chapter was when Gibbs was on the phone with Tim's mother, her pleadings were so sad and really brought me to tears. I wonder why Sarah would take the phone away from her mom, even if Tim did not want them to call Gibbs, why take the phone away? She does not strike me as the type of girl who always listens to her brother or what others say-but I am sure there is a reason for this. Thank heavens Gibbs has come to his senses and will try and help Tim, I sure the scene when they go to the prison and see Tim there will be emotional on both ends. So yea you have me hooked on yet another one of your epics, and I can only hope that you update this soon, but I can wait because I see that you have many stories in progress at the moment!
| STLFAN chapter 3 . 7/11/2010
Sounds like another winner. I'll be along for the ride on this one. :)
| chelsea1234 chapter 3 . 7/11/2010
Great Chapter! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. Thanks :)
| GibbsRules chapter 2 . 7/11/2010
OMG! Great start to what promises to be another awesome story from you! Loved how both Gibbs's and Tony's gut feelings were there at the same time. McGee arrested for murder, no way!. There HAS to be some mistake, surely?. Looking forward to the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can! Thanks :D
| chelsea1234 chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
Oh NO! Tim wouldn't kill anyone unless it was for his job. Can't wait to read the rest. Thanks :)
| xenascully chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
oooo...cant wait for the update! and dont worry about speeding up finishing Fractured Rules. People have followed it this long, they'll wait for the conclusion :)
| arkangel-36 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Nooooo! No No No No No No! I can't handle it! lol Wow I can't wait for this! You have me hanging on by the seat of my britches. Hurry back with more. I need more!