|Reviews for The Long Journey Home|
| Hoprabbit chapter 8 . 1/19/2011
...Well. that was an ending. XD
I don't really understand why this only has two reviews...That puzzles me to no end. It's an incredibly enjoyable and well written story(Except for the food bit...That was just nasty. XD) and it's multi-chapter. You'd think there'd be at least tens of them.
I suppose everyone just has bad taste. D
I very much liked how you showed her past, things we don't get to see and things we do. And it was an interesting idea, too, her being sick and close to death because, of all things, starvation.
There was a lot of emotion, and I liked how you showed all of it except Mel's fit, when she hit Te'ijal's pillow. I don't know why, something rubbed me wrong there.
I loved this story. Thank you for writing it; It was certainly something to tear me away from EdwardxMel for a while, and well worth my time. )
-Love and reviews, Hop.
| Bloody White Rabbit chapter 8 . 12/29/2010
Aw! I loved it :3
| Kagetora no Tsume chapter 7 . 7/22/2010
What a place to leave off!
I love this story, especially the way you show us flashbacks in Te'ijal's life that the game didn't cover.
Please keep writing!