God I loved it, I wish this was cannon.

Very good story.

Faved.

Feel sorry cause a enemy is dead? I got the feeling she was forced into forgiveness.

I really enjoyed this story, seeing things from Legion's pov and Tali's responses are really nice and extremely well done in my opinion.

The ending was extremely good but I definitely preferred the alternate ending since Legion actually survived.

Read all (except Tomorrow We Die since that takes place after this) of your other stories and also enjoyed them as well, thought I'd leave it all in one review since they're all sort of inter-connected. Moving on to FTWD now.

Remarkable. You excel in emotional conveyance between the writer and reader. It is not often that when reading an intense part of a story one finds themselves clenching their teeth or in an emotional part tearing up in pure emotion. You did very well with description, as you could simply read a paragraph and know exactly what the writer wants you to see. All else is left behind by how believable the story is. I had to recheck the game to make sure this didn’t really happen. You have the makings of a real writer.

Sincerily and with my Deepest Resects,

-The Guilty Bystander

Great story; I really enjoyed it. Expertly written, and characterization and development was excellent.

Absolutly marvelous first chapter

First saw a poster for this on DeviantArt, followed it up and here I am

Like how Jacob's moved from wanting to space Legion to caring for him, nice show of character

Like the touch in comparing Shepards look to vermire, the whole chapter is well thought out and detailed

This is looking like a great fic, I'll read on :D

Got linked to this fic by a Legion aficionado (fanatic, sorta the same thing)... and I must say, bloody good work. Characterization was excellent, dialogue flowed perfectly, and you hit just the right notes.

And as poignant as the 'true' ending was, I am glad you went with the alternate. Bittersweet is nice, but a character of Legion's caliber is just too good to waste.

i really wish i could have seen legion's reaction when everyone started clapping because they were so happy he was alive and when kasumi hugs him later

I love this, favourited

Gotta say, I like the alternate ending more...

Excellent story!

Kick ass.

Hehe, I was going to just wait 'till the end again, but that I must say, the cleverness in your logic over questioning deserves it's own comment.

I seriously have no words- that was beautiful. Just beautiful. All of it. The emotions felt real, the descriptions of what goes on in Legion's head bought him to life marvelously...and the endings, both of them were moving. I seriously loved it.

I've gotta admit, I liked the second ending better, but I'm a real sucker for happy endings. I honestly can't imagine you continuing with this storyline, it's nearly perfect as it is and I lack the imagination. But I also lack the imagination to come up with something like this in the first place. But even if I couldn't come up with whatever comes next, I think you can. And I know that if you do, it will be just as Amazing/Wonderful/Beautiful/Glorious as this one was. I'm going to be keeping an eye on you and your tales in the future.

;) nightbug