Fantstic. You had me enthralled from the get go, both with Tali's personality and the grief of Legion's demise. I, personally, am quite fond of the clanker, so seeing him, (yes, I call him a him, too) so broken was quite heartwrending for me.

I love how you've captured Legion's 'personality' too. So he's not just an artificial intelligence, but an actual being. Everything I read just makes me grieve for him all the more. A part of me wishes you find some miracle way to bring him back!

Thank you for this fantastic fiction. You've done very well on it, and I greatly anticipate future chapters.

Annw

Another great chapter, you did a wonderful job with the infiltration and the fight scene. Keep up the good work! :)

I'm left wanting more, I hope you update again soon.

A very interesting take on Legion/Tali - I really enjoy it.. can't wait to read more!

Like, like, like, like, like... like. This story is one of my favorites by far, itty bitty grammatical errors but nothing that could possibly detract from the incredible story you are creating. I look forward to your next update.

A very nice update. The description of the base was well-written, so were the conversations between the four. And it’s good that you are taking the time for writing each chapter. It usually makes the result read better. :)

Looking forward to more,

PashN.

I'm not pleased with how long it took to update, but I guess I should stop raising my expectations when it takes longer to update than what I'd expect for chapters of this size. People have lives after all.

Anyhow, I'm glad to see that Legion's infiltration was successful, along with that correction that Geth sometimes infiltrate. D

And it seems to me that Legion didn't think Shepard would be able to kill that scion and escape if left alone, which would explain its actions.

I really like how you have addressed Tali's frustrations and feelings about Legion and his relation with the crew.

The banter between the squad was amusing to read.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to your next update

I really want to know if legion will come back or if it's a thing where all you know is flashbacks from before he died. But seriously, I'll be waiting for an update on your story.

Is Legion really gone? one would think he would have his base code backed up on the second matrix.

Interesting. MOAR!

Awesome story so far! I love how you wrote the interaction between the characters! more chapters pls :)

haha, go Legion. Playing dead to go save his squad, that doesn't sound like robot logic. He must be learning something from the humans.

I like how you have tali spot on to character, but really, she need to let go of that anger. Aside from the fact that this was 300 years ago, she was not there. her people were to stupid to find another planet, forcing themselves to roam galaxy, and lets not forget, try to get their home planet back all the time. Now i understand what her people are doing, But seriously?jeez give it a break. human have gone through this before, slavery and such. you dont see blacks and white going head to head trying to kill each every day? she blames the geth for what happen to her, sorry girl, but i would side with common sense, most likely shepard common sense and point out that her people was at fault, and council at the time. One for not looking for another planet, the other for doing nothing...another thing. Why did they do nothing? did anyone actually think of that?

What else is there to say either than the fact that you got me hooked, and even though this chapter just came out, I can barely wait for the next one. Your plot is original and refreshing. The characters are spot on (you wrote a perfect rendition of Jacob). I must say you have a knack of ending every chapter in a cliffhanger, I’m not sure whether I hate it or love it but you manage to keep the suspense going.