Nooo! Legion! My best friend robot-buddy! :( God this is a good read, I really do hope he manages to come back in some way though, it'd just be too sad if he doesn't. Great story, I always like these interactions between him and Tali, it's such interesting drama and I look forward to the next update.

I didn't expect an update so soon, but you certainly delivered. Methinks this has just become one of my more favorite Mass Effect stories.

This story illustrates some of the conflict I had expected in ME2, and does it very well. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. _

Awesome chap!

Can't wait for the next one!

Interesting writing style. I’m curious to know about what really happened in the mission.

Looking forward to more. :)

I really wanna see more of this story!

Update as soon as you can!

Finally, out of the darkness comes another story centered around Tali and Legion. There really aren't enough of those. _

I'm sad to see Legion's current state, but glad to see how the rest of the crew, and Shepard, treat him as more than just a machine. I'm hoping Tali will too soon enough. And I also hope Legion will come back in one form or another in the future, even though that seems unlikely to me.

Anyhow, you're off to a great start, and I'm hoping I can expect updates in a reliable (hopefully short) amount of time.