Reviews for Foolishness
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
I will now forever see supreme hunters in SUCH a different way. :/
But don't be misled, I loved this! :DDDDDDDDD
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
oh thankyouthankyouthankyou
there isn't enough of this kinda stuff in this fandom
DarkEmress chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
I don't know whether to be disgusted or turned on. You got me all mixed up now. Would have been better if the Supreme Hunter turned into someone it consumed before. Just suggesting.

Nice work!
SkullkidCorvo chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Make him alive again :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I feel horrible. I almost crave a comfort chapter after something like this. UGH.
Jade-the-X9ian chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Just started on the game and decided to read some fictions about it.

Apparently, it was a... not-so-okay-idea?(I honestly have no idea, but let fandom be fandom) I kind of threw up a little... in my mouth...

But anyways, I liked your writing style, there are some small typos here and there but not enough to disturb the read of their reading experience... which I cannot tell if it is a good thing or a bad thing...

But in all seriousness, Alex isn't going to get pregnate, right? o.o

*shot* x_x

-Jade the X9ian _
Not nameless chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
...Is it bad that I liked this? And laughed at some points?

Yeah. It is. Who gives a f*ck though?

It's awesome.
Black Vendetta chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
One word for you.

DEVESTATOR.

15 Inch dick my ass (Not like that) try an raep Mercer when he knocks you full of Spines and tendrales.

Very... Arousing... btw. sry for the brief flame there... im a freaking Prototype Fanboy . *panting*
I'm a Lover not a Hater chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I think this is awesome, a bit gory since I have a wide range of imangination but awesome nevertheless. You should make a sequel where Alex wasn't dead and maybe the same pairing?
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I loved it. Seriously. Well done C:
Kiseichew chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
... 0_o D:

...Ew. Poor Mercer.

You couldn't put a *character death* warning in there? You said rape, not death by sex! o_o

Great. Now I'm gonna have nightmares. Eeuurrgh...
Must.Love.Zombies chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
o.o uhhhhhhhh im not going to lie . . . . that was creative . . . in the good way. ;) and i am officially scared of the Sumpreme Hunters. Forever. I dont think ill ever play the game without thinking of the story. But uhhh good job. I like it. Very very very very very unique. i wont forget it. ;3
Acrylic Stain chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Q.Q I'm afraid to keep playing the game, and I've only just started. Poor Alex is going to need some serious therapy and a couple hundred pain medications to get over that.

q.q It's good...even for a rape story. God...my friend's gonna die when she reads this. I actually like Alex. Now I'm gonna go beat the crap outta some hunters. Well, when I get a chance.
Firewolfie chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Why everyone keeps mocking this good fic? Especially you, KrimzonGuard Bites BaronP. Don't like, don't read.

I personally liked this, a lot, so you haters go weep in the corner.
MythicElf chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
O.o... i just died a little bit on the inside...

That was wonderfully scary... poor, poor, POOR Alex... all i could do while reading this was feel my eyes getting wider and wider and try my hardest not to totally PEE myself at how freakin erotic the SH was...

Wow, I loved it...alot...
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