|Reviews for Jealous?|
| Yukimei chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
It was a really good story!
Keep up the Good Work!
| Ved17 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Bwahahahahaha! Great ending!
| Chedtim chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Oh, god, I loved this! :D It was too cute, and the end- perfect X'D Great job, I love your style :)
| Thunderbreeze chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
That was a great story! I loved that Soul faced Maka's dad with her and that he kissed her in front of him to prove that he DID like her. It was also very sweet when Soul gave her his jacket when he had never even had a girlfriend before. I noticed very few grammatical errors, but I don't think that it made a difference in how good it was. I loved it, and I hope that you continue to write more! Thunder
| Eccentric.Elevator chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
D'aaaaawww! They're so cute! I love these little fluff type things - good job :D hoping for more! :D
| dotto123 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
omg how sweet i love it ur a true isperation cna u do another lovei dovey soul eate with thm to plz
| Ailisu chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
The ending was soo funny and the story is cute, I love it!
I don't write stories or oneshots but you can just reply if you want. :D
| xxWARxx chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This is absolutely adorale; I love it! It's funny at the end, too, when Spirit passes out. Great job! :D
| StarfireLuvRobin7 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Really cute. I 3'd it.
| Aria Soul chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
It was great! I love your writing style it's very discriptive!
| doubt to doubt chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
This is great! What I love most about this stoy is two things.
One, most jealousy stories are so... CHEESY and corny, I'm so glad this one isn't!
Two, unlike most stories, you continued it and didn't just stopit after the confession and kiss.
I love this story, you should write more SoulXMaka fanfics!
| Jojo chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I LOVED your story! At first i was a little confused and curious of who maka's crush was? I actually thought it was soul. I loved when soul takes maka to the restaurant and gives her a big smootch! I like twisted stories like that! (Good Job!) I also like how Soul had the (excuse me french) balls to tell Spirit how he felt towards maka. That was FUNNY! But seriously I really really really liked it! I cant wait to read another one!
| sailor sofia chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
cute! what was the boys name that Maka had a crush on?
| Amber Lehcar chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
So uber cute! Soul and Maka are my favorite couple! You did such a good job keeping them in character while making it uber fluffy! Keep up the good work!
| shyanne chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
i think this story was banging but u needed to add more chapters cuz when i was done reading it it was cool but i wanted to read what happened next so make sure next time put chapters kk