Reviews for John and Delenn in Mother's Day on Minbar
NHPW chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
This was adorable! But if you don't mind my saying so, you seem to have quite the affinity for comma usage! There are a bunch that could come out (such as commas on either side of a name) and the story would read more smoothly. Other than that, you know I love Sheridan family fluff. Thanks for posting this!
blue talith chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Yes, I did enjoy reading this story very much! Thank you NWHS.
Nyt Yanse chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
This was a really sweet piece. I always wanted to see the Sheridan's family on Minbar!