|Reviews for Betray|
| CosplayKitten chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
That was simply beautiful
| Nachtwelt chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
"Gimli need not fear his feelings being seen when the eyes of elves have become so blind!"
This is poetry and the whole story leaves my breathless. Wow, you have such a way with words. Amazing. Thank you for sharing this.
| Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
POETIC. EVERYTHING IS SO POETIC. I can't stand it, it's too good!
| Karkitty will eat you chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
| CrossedScarsX chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
If I could describe this story in a word, I would say 'pure'. I loved your grip on everyone's speaking style, and how you balanced Gimli's feelings in a believable and heartfelt manner, without overstating anything.
| FiresideChild chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Well, that right there is a piece to be treated with Revrence! It's beautiful! Well done and thanks for posting it!
| Fizzing Wizard chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This was really beautiful, and you managed to keep the characters IC - even Gandalf, whose presence was negligible! "Quake-heart." Awesome. There is nothing I don't like about this little story. It told much more than a lot of long stories do because of the thought you put into writing it. A big kudos to you.
Also, I love this underrated. pairing.
| L o l i t a d e l i r i u m chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
OMG this was lovely! Hope I can read more soon.
| Ron Brown chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
This a great story..it says so much... it leaves me breathless. Please write more.
| Trollmela chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Very beautiful story. The description was well done, and I thought the dialogue good as well. The details on elves' senses are certainly interesting; to be honest I would never have thought of those beyond sight. Is there any chance of you writing more of this pairing?