|Reviews for Destiny|
| Renegade Hero chapter 4 . 9/19
I realize it's been six years, but I do hope you will continue and finish this one day, what I've read so far is excellent. Your plot is cool, the first villain is awesome and I like the idea of battle armor. Your writing is pretty good. I hope you're okay and that all is well, I hope to see you writing again someday.
| DementedDebi chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
As always, you've captured the essence of Clock Tower 3; I also am loving this Klaw character. He's so devious! Like Chopper (but more awesome cus hes an OC)
Can't wait for the showdown between the two, and I'm really liking the pacing of the story. I eagerly await the next installement :)
| DementedDebi chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
Thank God I found this gem of a story!
I have to say, you had me hooked from the start. It was such an interesting premise; the opening chapter really set the tone for the story! I like how your not afraid to shy away from creating your own entity, I've a feeling this unnamed fellow is going to be a big hassle for Alyssa. I also like how your story almost seems like an FAQ, I thought it was really clever how the items Alyssa pocketed eventually get used and lead to other areas. As for the ghost of the Mayor, poor man! I really do feel a lot of sympathy for him. This is definetley a creepy start to what I think could be an excellent story, here's hoping you continue on with it and I'll definetley be checking out your other fics.
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