|Reviews for What Happens In Mexico|
| rossi chapter 9 . 7/11/2014
i love this story
| 04murano10 chapter 9 . 6/5/2014
| redorchid23 chapter 9 . 8/3/2011
| heidimillett3 chapter 9 . 8/14/2010
That was good.
I hope there is more soon.
| lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 9 . 7/25/2010
loved it, update soon
| ben.stasvu4ever chapter 9 . 7/25/2010
Mm Elliot and Olivia are smutty! Lol great chapter! Nd u updated...FINALLY
| edge15684 chapter 9 . 7/25/2010
another amazing chapter. Keep up the good work.
| bubblersparadise chapter 8 . 6/14/2010
Well I will also put my 2 cents in here.
I am not native English, so I use a beta for my stories to correct grammar and spelling mistakes and you should do the same. Your spelling is partly pretty horrible and this destroys a story and the fun reading it. Even for me and I am used to a lot.
About the storyline.I doubt you can hide the bump of belly you describe under wide cloths and the characters are all pretty OOC but I could live with all that if you could work on the spelling and grammar parts!
| edge15684 chapter 8 . 6/14/2010
wow this was fun. I can't believe they are engage. I'm not a big fan of the baby's name but I can live with that. You did a great job.
| K.E.B.123 chapter 8 . 6/14/2010
I love this story!
Keep it going
| lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 8 . 6/13/2010
i thought that alex was with fin? loved it, update soon
| baerritosandtears chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
me likey! please update!
| E1I3 chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Loving this story...So Good!
Just waiting for the Kinky Smut :P
Please keep up the quick updates
| bubblersparadise chapter 4 . 5/10/2010
cant wait to read more ;)
| edge15684 chapter 4 . 5/10/2010
Good chapter. I want more EO. Please I don't want them to keep it secret for to long. They are so cute together