|Reviews for And Then There's You|
| Xxx chapter 2 . 5/5
Fuck I swear if Bella is dumb enough to fall for Edward FUCK!
| cfigueroa78 chapter 31 . 4/22
I really detest Rosalie. Minimizing any abuse or assault because you think yours is more serious is deeply disturbing. Tragic experiences are tragic experiences and to minimize what a girl was going through getting beaten to near death by her father her whole life, it’s sick. I have been a victim of physical and sexual abuse but would never look at others and say my pain is worse than theirs. I never thought I would actually feel zero compassion for Rosalie’s situation.
| cfigueroa78 chapter 9 . 4/22
Being a survivor of abuse as a kid - physical, emotional and sexual, this was so hard to read. The feeling of helplessness is like your souls is being crushed. And so many young people are going through this everyday.
| 90sVibes chapter 2 . 4/16
i swear this has 'After' vibes
| Flora Mile chapter 32 . 4/12
It took me a while to get through this story. Took me 3 goes at it. The only reason was the story content, I would get so far and have to stop. But it was beautifully written, the story line was amazing and your character depth was spot on.
Yes Bella and Edward had their moments but who would not be damaged in some way with what these two went though. I am glad I stuck it out this time.
Thank you for writing it!
| atouchofcitron chapter 31 . 4/4
god, what an incredible story. i consumed this story in one go. you're a terrific writer (looking way beyond the errors because they weren't important here) and i hope you continued writing outside of ffn. everything came together so perfectly. thank you for this.
| Lizzard43 chapter 17 . 3/20
So the chief didn’t start the fire to hide his wife’s body. Hmmm, lots to think about...
And Edward was mad cuz he is kicking himself for kissing her. I’m just guessing
| Lizzard43 chapter 16 . 3/20
I’m thinking that the Chief set the fire to cover up the shit he did.
| Twinsmom chapter 32 . 3/15
I really liked your story. I was had to read the abuse in parts but you did it well. I was glad that Bella didn’t forgive Edward right away once he fessed up about the bet. Thanks for writing!
| datahawk chapter 32 . 2/18
| deangirl1996 chapter 32 . 2/16
I love this story! You are such a wonderful writer, better than I am. I'm glad I found this. It was well worth the reading.
| deangirl1996 chapter 30 . 2/16
I love Edward, didn't like your version of him at first but now I do since a couple of chapters back. Their background stories are so sad even though this is a work of fiction. It sounds all so realistic!.
| deangirl1996 chapter 29 . 2/16
The ending of this chapter made me so happy I'm crying happy tears as I type this review. *grabs a tissue from the tissue box* That's right Bella. Go Bella! Don't let your dad win, you've made it this far... I consider that a victory!
| deangirl1996 chapter 28 . 2/16
I'm keeping this story forever! You know, to like read it again if I choose to. I don't think she forgave him too fast either.
| deangirl1996 chapter 26 . 2/16
Listened to the song in your authors note. It fits perfectly also being that it's their song too so yeah there's that.