Reviews for And Then There's You
texbratt67 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
OMG, what the he** happened to Bella on her 13th B-Day? Lookin' forward to reading more and get to the happy parts.
EverlastingMuse chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
very good!
Weolynn chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Wonderfully written! So much action it made the fluff better. How much do you have outlined or do you just go off the cuff?
Duckmuckchuck chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
how could anyone hate you? you are seriosly my fav fanfic author! perfect combo of fluff and angst :)
PushingReality34 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
best chapter yet. I love care free Bella, and it seems like Edward is starting to fall in love with Bella. I hate Charles (he messed up Eddies face) *Sobs*.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
LoriDuchess chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
very ood hurry up and update
Chi0075 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Great chapter!

Edward met Bella's father, the real Charlie, shut up a jackass by the way! Loved that every time he thought of Bella he wanted to beat Charlie to death

I think you are doing a fantastic job and you have really created a great relationship and a special bond between Edward and Bella

I am looking forward to Edward starts to become protective of Bella, and finally falls in love with her, but i know it's gotta take time of course;) but I still can't wait for it to happen

By the way - this song reminded me very much about your story:

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Erik Hassel - Hurtful

Anyway, keep up the good work
kezcullen chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
excellent chapter all round. we are getting the needed backstory, and it's consolidation of your eat earlier foreshadowing.

a bit of a cliffie ending tough.
LoriDuchess chapter 9 . 6/14/2010
you are a very talented writer, hope to read more stories.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
There is amazing balance to that

chapter! Is there going to be HEA?

Thank you for another great chapter! :)
slayerElLiE13 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
it brutal! but i cant stop reading! lol 3
Marianka chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
OMG,so sad..)
Manna1 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
A really nice mix of light and dark. I like that the characters have more than just surface motives, I really like the complexity of your creations.
I.S.Teigen chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Wow!

I really love this story, it's like you write like a pro : D

Update soon : D
ellescott chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Thank you for the update. What a good chapter. I feel so bad for these are so broken. Edward is starting to let his walls down.
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