|Reviews for And Then There's You|
| Chi0075 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Edward met Bella's father, the real Charlie, shut up a jackass by the way! Loved that every time he thought of Bella he wanted to beat Charlie to death
I think you are doing a fantastic job and you have really created a great relationship and a special bond between Edward and Bella
I am looking forward to Edward starts to become protective of Bella, and finally falls in love with her, but i know it's gotta take time of course;) but I still can't wait for it to happen
By the way - this song reminded me very much about your story:
Erik Hassel - Hurtful
Anyway, keep up the good work
| kezcullen chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
excellent chapter all round. we are getting the needed backstory, and it's consolidation of your eat earlier foreshadowing.
a bit of a cliffie ending tough.
| LoriDuchess chapter 9 . 6/14/2010
you are a very talented writer, hope to read more stories.
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
There is amazing balance to that
chapter! Is there going to be HEA?
Thank you for another great chapter! :)
| slayerElLiE13 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
it brutal! but i cant stop reading! lol 3
| Marianka chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
| Manna1 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
A really nice mix of light and dark. I like that the characters have more than just surface motives, I really like the complexity of your creations.
| I.S.Teigen chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
I really love this story, it's like you write like a pro : D
Update soon : D
| ellescott chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Thank you for the update. What a good chapter. I feel so bad for these are so broken. Edward is starting to let his walls down.
| auroraboralis chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Well, I'm ready for Charlie to get a big bite from his Karma...now!
| Stina Whatever chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
| FightTheDead93 chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
this is one awesome story!
| crazyj9girl chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
thanks for the mention in the Authors notes.. great chapter..
| Snusa chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
So many emotion in this chapter, good to finely see a bit behind edwards mind too. Hopefully bella will open up to edward about her 13 birthday and maybe get some pain out.
| Snakefang chapter 12 . 6/13/2010