Reviews for And Then There's You
H Toones chapter 9 . 6/9/2010
OMG. I love your story, but this chapter was sooo moving! I literally cried. You are amazing! I can't wait til you update! (I've read the later chapters too, I just especially appreciate your writing in this one. :)
Weolynn chapter 11 . 6/8/2010
Edward is not looking too hot right 's sad that he feels no connection with his family. Is it just his perspective? Is he really a disappointment to them? He's pretty much screwed now, huh? Charlie is horrible and I do hope he shoots his off his own b*lls. After seeing Bella"s drawing, you would think edward would put it together (dumb, but that's a readers' perspective, no?)I can understand Bella not protesting her innocence- similar to what I would , though, it just HAS to come up soon? Of course you've had THIS question-"When do the snotts find out she didn't nark?" Who finds out? I'm surprised Jasper is so into revenge.
EverlastingMuse chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
PushingReality34 chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
I don't hate Edward for this chapter. I understand what he's coming from, but he is stil kind of a duch bag. I fell sorry for Bella, but she knows how all of those people are, why would she go and ask Edward that in front of them?

Can't wait for the next chapter.
sophia18 chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
Very good and history! :P


PS: sorry for my too bad english but I am writing but not easy for me to read english
roxiegirl chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
Great chapter! Edward is such as ass! But he's in trouble now! See ya next time bb.
TexasTwilight77 chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
As I said before, Edward is a douche! At least right now. Of course when I get caught up it has to be a cliffy, isn't that the shit? Anyways, I'll definitely be waiting for the update, keep up the good work. ;)
robfans chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
Edward slowly getting Bellas trust then he ruined the reason why Bella needs to guard herself,cant blame her.
TexasTwilight77 chapter 10 . 6/6/2010
I totally get the bird reference. She can't leave until she knows her mom can be able to live on her own. I'm just going to go on to the next chapter cause I'm so caught up in this story. Great job. ;)
TexasTwilight77 chapter 9 . 6/6/2010
Very hard chapter to read. You did an excellent job with the discription and the song only added to the atmosphere. Excellent job, truely, you blew me away with this chapter. ;)
TexasTwilight77 chapter 8 . 6/6/2010
Sorry so short but it's getting really good! ;)
TexasTwilight77 chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
How on earth can Edward keep doing this with out any remorse? I know he gets little bits of guilt...I just need faith that he'll come along faster. The bright side is that Jake will be coming soon, can't wait! ;)
katierose127 chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
this story is really good!
TexasTwilight77 chapter 6 . 6/6/2010
Can they seriously not see how damaged Bella is? My heart goes out to her, I'm dying to see when Jake comes in, hopefully soon. Another good one. ;)
TexasTwilight77 chapter 5 . 6/6/2010
I'm glad that Bella isn't falling for it...for now. I'm also dying to see how Edward felt when he saw Bella in the hallway. This just keeps getting better! ;)
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