|Reviews for Siblings Comfort|
| jenn008 chapter 12 . 1/20
| Love Faith Embers chapter 12 . 9/8/2014
Good story so far! I like it! Please keep going...
| Mordacious Moratorium chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
It seemed to have a good plot so I clicked your story. I literally could not get past the first chapter. First off, Two important character's name were wrong. Second, far too many punctuation errors, grammatical errors, and spelling errors were in the story. This could be great but I'd suggest getting a beta to proofread. WIthout all those errors, this could be a really great story many will read and review. The first chapter is always important becausethat's where you need to grab the reader. Make them unable to out it down, make them look ath their favorites every day to see if your story has been updated. It is kind of like a first impression. There is a good number of sibling stories with Harry. Make sure yours stand out.
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| Kitara Kujin chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
I couldn't get past chapter 4. Please fix your sentences, grammar, and spelling.
| SunshineForever96 chapter 12 . 2/28/2013
Great story. I hope you update soon
| ShatteredDragon chapter 12 . 10/4/2012
please oh please oh please update soon!
| uwishuwerecool chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
please i want more do write soon please
| Skye Guardian chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
Update please when you can!
| Reishin Amara chapter 12 . 6/16/2012
this story makes me weep. TwT
| The-Resident chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
This could be quite an interesting story, but I have problems with the multiple spelling errors. You really should have had someone proofread this before you posted.
| MusicxButterflyX chapter 12 . 1/8/2012
looking forward tomore. well written.
| SoulMore chapter 12 . 12/28/2011
| The Black claudrons chapter 6 . 12/27/2011
I HATE U. i cryed through the whole chapter. i love ur story though.
| jada951 chapter 12 . 12/24/2011
here's to Christmas wishes coming true!
Thanks for another interesting chapter. Don't know that I'd want to jump on a troll's back, but it worked for Legolas. Oops! wrong story.
| LightNote19 chapter 9 . 12/24/2011
I was seriously liking this story tell you put them in different houses. The writing and describtions are great but I don't like were this is going...