Reviews for Two Kisses
NinjaKittehz chapter 2 . 6/7/2015
Okay, you are in the camp that turns Ginny into a deplorable bitch who never faces consequences for her actions. She punches him in the gut and calls him a bastard before realizing he's still injured but not ONCE apologizing for hurting him when he's ALREADY hurt. This characterization is TERRIBLE. Why the HELL would you and so many others think this is acceptable behavior?
nayin17 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Wish this really happens in DH
NixiStix chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
it's so short!
aliceCullenCutie651 chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
loved it!
angel chapter 2 . 6/27/2010
this is really good, i like the sassy version of ginny...u should make this into a longer story...its really good UPDATE!
Lyric Medlie chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
wonderful! :) loved it!
Lyric Medlie chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Wonderful! This is what i always thought should've been in DH, i loved this! :)
Burns9569 chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
very nice, good story.
Burns9569 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
You nailed it, this is how it should of went in book 7. Beautiful luv it 3 !
HesMines chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Just found this and I love it! This totally should have happened in the books! The last line was just brillant! x
Squibghost chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Absolutely lovely. Although, "Voldomort finally killed me," would also have made a fine last sentence, no?
pistonunhappy227 chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
actually he came back to make sure that the dark lord went down, but don't tell her that. Odd that there was no mention of a scar this time, the first was part of the HP charm. like that she was mad, not sappily jumping into his arms. good call. your story sort of slides off the fred death, which was why she had been with her family, but I figured they would have said something to each other. maybe she would have told ron who passed it on or sumit like that. Not many mistakes in grammer, other than the curving sevens. thanks
pistonunhappy227 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
of course they should have kissed in this part! don't know what J.K. was thinking.(cried like a school girl when they broke up at the funeral) Not kissing here added strength to the kiss on his birthday and made it sound cool when he let V hit him with the green that could have referenced a kiss in the room of requirment. your story was quick and to the point so far now i"ll check to see the next chappy. Hopefully you sill have curved your sevens more to my liking. Hmmm. thanks