Reviews for Make Your Move
loopyhutton chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Loved it!
KoganLoverPro2 chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
hahahaha Jimmy...
kendallsLover chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
thataah.nascimento chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
jthe4003 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Love love love it.
hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
very hot, great story! D
xNomii chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Very hot and I love the humour in this!

And your name, is it from the song of Fall out boy?
TheHornyVirgin chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Very nice! I love it! :)
TheyRAWR chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
holy crap, that's good! Great job! I wan't to hear about them playing the other games too, LOL!
wootwootpie chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
teh hoooottnnesss :)

p.s.: could you give me a link to the lj btr kink meme? Please & thank you! :D
Yuki Tenshi-anime freak chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
om f-ing g that was awesome
Clarry chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
You know, James/Carlos is not really my thing, but if they were all like this, I'd read much more of it. You have a way with dialogue that makes it enjoyable to "listen" to the boys banter back and forth and try to one-up each other. I also really like that you didn't make James all sissy-like. As much as I love James' superficial side, it's nice to see him somewhat dominant in a sexual situation. Really enjoyed this one!
scribe-o-the-stars chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
That was wicked hot, I don't usualy read carlos fics, but umm... Yeah ;)

Great job, Im excited to see what you do next!
anneryn7 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
OH man! This is smoldering. You did such a great job with this!

-I adore James & Carlos-


EstadaKochu chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Theres dis fic - What Could Possibly Go Wrong - and they havin sex on da pool table n itz lyke, da same.
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