Reviews for Souls to Waste
ermireallydontcare chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
I really love this story, and you deserve the win :)

I like how you contrasted Rosalie's request for Emmett's change with Bella's decision to change.

Just one point though, not that's it anything particularly important to the story just a wrong word. Esme broke her leg, not her arm.
carbrain chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I like the simplicity of your prose.

This part, for example, was meaningful and effective without being over the top:



Edward shrugs."

Your characterization of Edward was stellar. I think you got the depth of the conflict he struggles with on a daily basis. Well deserved win - I enjoyed reading it.
Babette12 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
You know how much I enjoyed this the first time! I'm so glad yo won! That's wonderful! Congratulations. It was truly deserved.

Rochelle Allison chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
um, wow.

that was incredible... and heavy... and just... completely canon. i'm so impressed. i don't think i have it in me the way you do, to create something so close to the original yet unique.

you deserved the rookie win.

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