Reviews for Too Much Love, Can Be Too Much
EverfreeSparkle chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
This is really good! It's very heart warming and I just Love the idea of daemons and their partners being... Partners. Seems right.
Kochich chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
Im surprised that out of thousand stories I've found only one about this. I wish there would be more.
Ninja Star Light chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
omg dude I love it! Please update soon!
tfbl chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
Really good. Nice plot development.
marcie chapter 2 . 6/3/2010
keep in mind, this is not a flame, it is constructive criticism.

1. i find this story very cute, but it is slightly gross in that pantalaimon is always an animal. if he were able to transform into a human, this story could be a lot better.

2. please do me and everyone else a favor and include no explicit sex scenes. the stories seem much more loving if they are not pornographic.

3. there are some minor grammatical mistakes. nothing big, just keep this in mind in chapter 3.

that will be all

the not-so-humble-critic,

MARCIE
Pickle daisy chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Hey! Niiice story! Continue!